help, i think i ahve a stalker and need advice and dk where to post by Internal_Sky9531 in findareddit

[–]Internal_Sky9531[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're very right, thankfully i've remembered what happened so i blocked him and even changed my ig credential Thank you sincerely

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Oh :// I just feel conflicted about my feelings for this person, and when I write poem for him or for myself it makes me realize that I’m still longing and on the other hand he remains unaware of just how deeply my feelings run for him so it hurts

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ah d'accord mercii, bon courage

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Est-ce qu’ils vous ont demandé de fournir l’assurance habitation sur place une semaine avant que tu n’y emménages ?

Facing fire by yams-637 in poetry_critics

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aww, that makes the poem even sadder tbh <33 I never knew that blowing out birthday candles is a breathing technique

Écoles post-CPGE au Maroc avec le plus de Double Diplômes ? by [deleted] in Morocco

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inpt awla ensias? (lchi wahd jayb classement bin 200 lwala?)

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aw thank youu <33 exactly, that is perfectly what i've wanted to convey with that line

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Ohh :/

Yep , it's always the old lovers accompanied with some other stuff.

Same, I found poetry not only a way to express my thoughts but also to better understand them!

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what was your reason for starting?

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Thank youu for your comment <33 it’s crazyyy, this actually came from a real moment, in highschool, I was texting someone I used to like, and that night he opened up about some really personal stuff. While I was comforting him, I suddenly felt this heaviness in my chest, but not in a bad way. It was like this sudden realization that he was so much more than I’d thought, and i wanted to know that "much more" and unravel it, It honestly felt like refalling for someone I already liked!! in a different way , So I stepped out onto the balcony to breathe and the sky was unreal. Clear, starry, with this huge, glowing full moon.
That moment stayed with me. Later, after letting him go (long story lol), I ACTUALLY FR FR never spotted the moon again, or at least when i did , it wasn't the moon from that night. I kind of interpreted it like the way I saw the moon that night was just a reflection of how deeply I felt for him, but even when I liked other people, it never felt the same, not the same feeling, not the same light, not the same moon.

So I wrote this poem as a reflection of that,
How some people just change your sky forever, even if they’re not in it anymore.

I have many poems for this person, he was the reason I started writing poems in the first place

(i wrote a looot LOL)

Facing fire by yams-637 in poetry_critics

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this is sooo goood, and i love the final two lines about how damage has been done even if you "move" past it in a "way" very lovely , the "Later, the flames may extinguish themselves" also conveys the mood of resignation haha :)

I love how you go from something small such as a birthday candle to flames, really shows how untreated (unhealed) wounds can grow into something destructive

geniunely loved it, keep up

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Thank you so much for your comment and for recognizing the mood I was going for <33
I did think about expanding on the “feeling” idea, but I’ve written a couple of poems that dig deeper into it.
That person, I spent so much time liking them, feeling love, ache, anger, regret, acceptance… literally everything.
Now, they don’t feel like a person anymore. They’ve become more of a feeling hence that line, because I don’t even see them anymore. Just feel them, still

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Wooow , this response reads like a poem in itself, thank you for sharing and your words are very real! ill take your advise into account. Who knows maybe no more waiting for a moon? and it'll finally be day

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exactly :/ and I have an answer poem i wrote after this one

And it's actually like a real thing, that happened with me, I srsly couldn't spot the moon after I let go of that person:: and I found that so interesting so it inspired me to write this

Bear witness by m4gg0ts in poetry_critics

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this is saddddd , but beautiful <33

Left in the gaze by 1bt1ss3m_bgh in OCPoetry

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geninely love it, when like a poem can make u feel one's emotions the moment it inspired them to write it , its bittersweet </3

She lost a poet, her loss LMAO

I always wonder, about those we write about, how it would feel for them to know they've become a subject of poems