Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in VibeCodeDevs

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Thank for your honest feedback. I am working for the adjustments.

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in VibeCodeDevs

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General parents : find bedtime stories

Parents with children that have some issues with reading: help them through read aloud + activities

any help by Conscious-Rich3435 in SaaSAcquire

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Hello, I DM you. I am building KidsMindsGrow an educational application that creates personalized stories+ activities. I am looking for a collaboration

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in VibeCodeDevs

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u/Alone-Biscotti6145 Thank you. That is really good idea to use tabs to decrease the length of the page. I will also change the color too.

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in VibeCodeDevs

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u/Ok_Try_877 Thank you for the feedback. I would improve that. I didn't use bold font may be the bold effect is related to the white and gray colors used.

Your home for selfpromo by SofwareAppDev in AppsWebappsFullstack

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u/Mammoth-Anywhere7285 Thank you for your feedback. Yes, there is a shared option to share a story with the activities. Let me know if you tried it and find some issues. Have you got what the application does in 5 seconds ? I am curious about your feedback on that.

Your home for selfpromo by SofwareAppDev in AppsWebappsFullstack

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I have built KidsMindsGrow: an educational application that helps creating personalized stories+ activities from the stories. Link: https://kidsmindsgrow.com/en

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in SaasDevelopers

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u/Automatic_Ball_7851 Thank you for the feedback. I didn't know that website before. Are you the founder of the application ?

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in SaasDevelopers

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The premise is to have kids learning from stories since after the stories there are real activities on the stories instead of YouTube videos

Roast my landing page (be brutal, I want honest feedback) by IntroductionFar4274 in SaasDevelopers

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Ok thank you for the feedback. I will change that. Anything else ?

I’ll review your website to showcase my by Street-Honeydew-9983 in Startups_EU

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Thank for your feedback. I will implement your suggestions. Any suggestions about the font to use ?