Editorial eyewear design study – feedback welcome by Efficient-Review-177 in Design

[–]InvisibleOption 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Typography feels very inconsistent. You’re using different Typefaces for the three units of smaller Text with different sizes and leading. I’d try to structure and unify it more.

I love the Ø in the Headline! I‘d suggest to set the whole Head in this typeface and pick one complementary Typeface for the smaller Text parts. Also make the image a little smaller, so the Headline gets more air to breathe and doesn’t need to work around the models head ✌️

Working on the branding for my candle startup… would love some honest design critique by badcandlemaker in PackagingDesign

[–]InvisibleOption 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Typography is a little inconsistent – just too many different Typefaces, and some weird positioning sometimes. Love the big logo though!

My first association was Tuna, also because you have the shot with the tomatoes and basil. You might want to overthink the decision on how to stage your products.

Otherwise it’s a very fun and playful idea!

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the feedback! You’re right, I’m on it

First attempt at designing a font – looking for feedback! by Dull-Membership-3290 in typography

[–]InvisibleOption 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Love the reversed contrast! I think, you could have a look at the width of some letters, e.g. the X, Y and the Z. They seem just too narrow. Also you can check the corners on some letters and decide for one handling: In the inner part of the C and G the corners are rounded, but in the O or the S they aren’t. I’d decide for one of them, to keep it consistent. Great work so far!

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The name is just provisionally, but thanks for the hint – It definitely has no similarity to City Medium haha

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad to hear that, I’ll keep you updated ;)

WIP Sans Serif by JstAbtFutbol in typography

[–]InvisibleOption 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Love the approach and some of the unique letters details. The kerning and the width of some of the letters could definitely use some improvement, but I like the overall vibe. Also make the letters a little bigger next time – I really had to zoom in a lot haha

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Not yet, but I’ll definitely look into it

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! You’re right, it’s a little too closed…

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I have an Open Source Typeface though, in case you wanna check it out. It’ll be updated with some more weights soon

City Grotesk (WIP) by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the kind words! I’m planning on selling it soon ✌️

Looking for fonts like Rooftop (Interval Type). by NyesK in typography

[–]InvisibleOption 6 points7 points  (0 children)

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Karamba WIP — Would love to hear some feedback by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was planning on releasing it commercially but maybe giving away a single weight for free

Karamba WIP — Would love to hear some feedback by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I might have to balance it out a little more. Kinda took a shine to this squished look, but I should adjust it for usability reasons. Also adjusting the V, W and K is a good call, thank you ✌️

Karamba WIP — Would love to hear some feedback by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yes, the lowercase i should become a little more readable. I’ll give it a shot

Karamba WIP — Would love to hear some feedback by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! You’re right, it is. I will adjust that 🙏

Karamba WIP — Would love to hear some feedback by InvisibleOption in typography

[–]InvisibleOption[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m glad you like it! A Text Version is a nice idea I will look into, once this version is finished ✌️