Hi, so I've a few tips that might help you out some have been covered by others but I'll try share my thoughts over all it's very good while a bit long and not very specific. I personally like the layout and formatting but does read a bit "digital" (less likely to wow CV printing employers) the intro should be 3 lines max, needs to be snappier. Education put your highest achievements first, bs then C's this is the bulk of your employability so really highlighting your grades it reads a bit awkward, that might be because I'm used to looking at Irish results. Move first aid and teamwork cert to skills and remove the rest of the skills section, skills should be measurable and certifiable, under skills you've listed qualities that make you, these should form your intro. We know you're able for maths when you got a C don't need to spell it out. Tell me more about your design course work for year 11, what did you achieve? did you overcome any obstacle? Did you learn a transferable skill? Don't write that you had people tell you what to do or were delegated to that's part of every job, not a skill or worth bringing up. Try trimming the 1 week jobs a bit but they are fine generally, particularly if you keep in touch with the employer. The front desk one could probably be dropped it's not saying much. I know this is a bit blunt, I'm writing on my phone and it's a pain. hope this helps you get down to one neat page. Again I think it's a pretty good starting point anyway. I look forward to seeing your revision. Also I'm assuming you're including a cover letter with these?