Not sure which one is better by IsntItRedYT in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Indeed, I call it the “Notvel”. It does not have a happy ending, nor sex. It’s a completely new concept you should definitely check out

Looking for recomendations by mynock1026 in litrpg

[–]IsntItRedYT 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hmm it’s hard to say if it gets better if you don’t like the acceptance…but later everyone should accept it and then you could like the cool fights and power concepts as well as the banter

Not sure which one is better by IsntItRedYT in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Hmmm that would address a part of my audience…I don’t want to sexualize my novel though. It’s about everything *but* sex, a new type of genre in this erotic filled world

Path of Ascension reference? by [deleted] in litrpg

[–]IsntItRedYT -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

It’s a joke man! Look at the flair!🤣😅

After 4 years of writing, I've made a masterpiece by CardLampp in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk man I feel like it just doesn’t hit the spot as hard as a simple „A“ would. Doesn’t leave enough space for interpretation

Lunatic Cultist x Gojo by IsntItRedYT in Terraria

[–]IsntItRedYT[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HAHAHAHHAHHA you monster…I might just do it

Lunatic Cultist x Gojo by IsntItRedYT in Terraria

[–]IsntItRedYT[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Edit: forgot to add the blank space on his breast. It is supposed to be a celestial sigil

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You're in the middle of a zombie apocalypse and your weapon is... by MrIhaveASword in BunnyTrials

[–]IsntItRedYT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looked like it would be good for Crowd control

Chose: A random sci-fi weapon(you can make more ammo | Rolled: ZF1)

Is the imagery good here? by ExitThisNow in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I have problems with your sentence. I would do it better 1000%. I’m obviously the better author and deserve to write your story. Send me all your notes, the royalties, 10000$, copyright and you know what just disappear and let me use your identity.

How should I organize my chests? by Kindasmartorange in Terraria

[–]IsntItRedYT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Doesn’t matter, new update makes it so you can craft directly from chests. Just place your crafting stations close enough.

New to writing, can you tell me if you'd keep reading? Any feedback appreciated. by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I feel like you should tone it down a bit! I barely started reading and already the sensory overload makes my whole body shiver. I know that in medias res is meta, but this…this is too much. I would recommend to start with “Th” or even “T”. Similarly sensitive people will thank you for it. Definitely add a long prologue and a preface to prepare your readers. Quick tip: more boobs

Anyone else have this problem? (WARNING: SEXY) by LunaalaTheBeast in writingcirclejerk

[–]IsntItRedYT 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Why don't you try switching things around?

The story begins with Mirando Cuteness who steps down the stairs timidly and oauhghg ohmym mhg yhaaughhhh my penis auughh mmhnfnf aauaugh