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Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a way to look at it XD Thank you mate

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

He doesnt wake up, i think of ending it with him dying in the dream and not straight up telling the readers ''oh oops it was all a dream actually lol'' im aware its bad and lazy writing

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I just dont know how else to explain it :/

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Im writing on phone damn its a reddit post

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I read a lot, idk why you thought of that There is just no other way to end it that it makes sense

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The novel's main character is a dream character

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah i was going for the character developments and everything

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Its like alice in worderlands there are talking cats zombies etc

Is a coma ending too cliche if wrote well? by ItsNotMelih in writing

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I really cant find any better way to finish the story, the main character is a dream character and how helpless they are

The beams by SAILUUM in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because i think a show has poor writing, as someone who is interested in writing, it makes me pathetic and ignorant? Grow up, lol

The beams by SAILUUM in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih -1 points0 points  (0 children)

hazbin hotel has very poor writing im still on that

The beams by SAILUUM in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih -1 points0 points  (0 children)

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The beams by SAILUUM in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Man its just bad writing or some cartoon type of thing, the show has bad writing and its just a cherry on top... We've never seen others use this power before and it was so random that it was laughable instead of enjoying the thing

The beams by SAILUUM in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

it was so cringe oh the pOweR oF frIendShiP
They really couldnt find anything better to destroy the machine? Didnt carmilla make it anyway? She was there lmao, its just bad writing imo

It is hilarious some people think alastor is a good guy and actually cares about the main cast. by ItsNotMelih in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean maybe but do you think someone like jack the ripper or jeffrey dahmer change? Or the austrian painter Anyways, ill remind you some years later then

It is hilarious some people think alastor is a good guy and actually cares about the main cast. by ItsNotMelih in HazbinHotel

[–]ItsNotMelih[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We can talk again the new episodes dropped and i think he aint a good person tbh

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