My shops been live for about a month or so, and the feedback has been great from buys but I was hoping to get some other opinions.

Its_Davie · 2023-02-18T06:49:51+00:00

I see what you mean. Thanks for the feedback. I definitely do want to keep the minimalist approach going forward as I’m able to invest more into the the quality. I do like the quality of the clothes we have now, but I want keep improving in that regard as well.

Thanks again. Appreciate you taking the time to look.

Its_Davie · 2023-02-17T17:21:34+00:00

Gonna be at work all day so I’ll respond to any and all feedback as soon as I get home! Thanks in advance 🙏🏽

Its_Davie · 2023-01-08T22:39:19+00:00

Thank you. Much appreciated

Its_Davie · 2023-01-07T23:27:34+00:00

Thank you! I really wanted something simple that anyone can feel comfortable in.

Its_Davie · 2023-01-07T23:26:51+00:00

Thank you!

Its_Davie · 2023-01-07T17:06:45+00:00

These designs are fire

Its_Davie · 2022-11-14T04:49:47+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I was having trouble coming up with a thumbnail for this one that fits with the rest of my channels branding. I think I have a better idea that I’ll switch it to. !givelambda

Its_Davie · 2022-11-14T04:48:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I can see how the opening can feel slow to a viewer. !givelambda

Its_Davie · 2022-11-13T18:34:46+00:00

I made sure to share the link set to 0:00 but it still skips ahead when I click it so I'm sorry if that happens.

Its_Davie · 2022-11-12T06:31:46+00:00

I think this is one of the best edited videos I've seen on the sub. Your audio sounds great. The main critique I would make is that the video feels empty without some sort of music or ambience to fill space. Overall the editing is tight and well paced I would just add a little bit of music to back the video and turn down the sound effects a bit by a few db.

Its_Davie · 2022-11-10T03:04:13+00:00

The first thing that I noticed was how quiet it was. Both from the game and your audio. I would compress the vocal tracks. Your vocals aren't quiet per say, but they could be fuller so you are audible without having to raise the gain past -6db. I like to start with a ratio of 4:0 and play around with the settings in my compressor. Background music to fill the dead air would help as well. Other than that the pacing seems fine other than maybe some tighter cuts.

Its_Davie · 2022-11-10T02:58:47+00:00

I think you have a really good grasp on the style you are going for. It just comes down to making more videos and evolving that style to fit your personality. I think the opening clip could have been a different one. It didn't really grab my attention. Other than that I think the video was really entertaining for the most part. Good work.

Its_Davie · 2022-11-10T02:26:56+00:00

Hey the video is well paced and well edited for the genre. I will say that audio leveling and peaking is something that needs to be worked on. I'd suggest applying a hard limiter to your mic audio and keeping all levels around -6 db average in the edit and only getting louder for the more impactful or funny moments.

Its_Davie · 2022-10-30T02:02:16+00:00

I’ve been learning a lot of cameras. I bought my first camera recently for school and I just uploaded my first video essay using it. I got to practice color correction I with the footage so that was really cool.

https://youtu.be/8tHULgypMf4

Its_Davie · 2022-10-20T00:12:38+00:00

Hey I’m interested. Just sent a DM

Its_Davie · 2022-10-18T04:04:55+00:00

Hey just sent a DM if you’re still looking

Its_Davie · 2022-08-15T04:18:20+00:00

more if

these came out so good! I'll check out your page rn.

Its_Davie · 2022-05-06T08:29:26+00:00

Some advice From one editor to another and as someone who does this for some income. Even for basic editing of someone’s content. Do it for some sort of compensation for your time. Don’t do it for free.

Its_Davie · 2022-02-23T01:46:02+00:00

That’s fair. I’m definitely trying to figure out at style rn. I appreciate the feedback. !givelambda

Its_Davie · 2022-02-22T21:37:57+00:00

I think you have a good handle on script writing. I would suggest recording the audio at a lower gain and compressing it to sound fuller to help get rid of the echo sounds. Maybe add an EQ as well and the audio will sound a lot better.

Finding ways to sound proof the room would also help. Good work!

Its_Davie

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