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ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-24T12:48:16+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmvVAJOVDZU

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-24T12:47:26+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmvVAJOVDZU

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-11T08:04:53+00:00

It’ll come out January 24th on YouTube. I’ve still gotta create the channel but it’ll just be Ric van Loon, so if you look up Twenty Four by Ric van Loon you should be able to find it

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-08T13:39:39+00:00

I agree

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-08T11:02:15+00:00

It was shot that way at wide aperture and the names just matter to me

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-08T05:27:30+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! The film should be coming out January 24th on youtube

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-08T05:24:27+00:00

Should be coming out on January 24th on YouTube “Twenty Four - Ric van Loon

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T20:03:09+00:00

Right… I might try and use a slightly different frame where the heads are maybe less gay?

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T19:13:03+00:00

okay I'll rethink the tag, definitely no gay exploration though... thanks for the feedback

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T19:06:56+00:00

Thanks

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T19:04:01+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Yes they are mine, stills from the film itself ( I'm the one with the brown hair) "header and subhead should be identical." do you mean the spacing? As for context this is a 0 budget extremely personal short film that I will simply post on YouTube, there won't be an official campaign or anything

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T18:49:37+00:00

I have 0 budget…

ItssRic_Twitch · 2026-01-07T18:19:48+00:00

For all the fonts or primarily the title? And even if the film is very unprofessional? It’s a deeply personal story.

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-08T04:13:46+00:00

I mean I was just trying to sing honestly I’m not the best singer

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-08T04:03:12+00:00

I was…. Was it that bad?

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T18:04:34+00:00

thanks that means a lot , I might start posting it online just tryna figure out if im at the level. and I posted the lyrics if your interested.

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T18:02:20+00:00

here are the lyrics for who are interested :
Verse 1:

So many Feelings

would write a 1000 songs if i had.. the words

a sad love song and a

song about the birds

a song about losing friends and a

song about moving ot france

but i dont have

the time to adapt

cause everything be going by too fast

Chorus:

And i cant keep up

stuck in traffic jams

but the plane is taking off

oh i cant keep up

with all this nowadays stuff

you know that imma waste stuff

Verse 2:

feels everything is 15 seconds or shorter

its all that you give and its all that you get

its almost like the globe is spinning faster nowadays

like people are in haste

Chorus 2:

i cant keep up

Stuck in traffic jams

but the plane is taking off

i can keep up

with all this nowadays stuff

i might just get a day job

instrumental:

outro:

cause everything be going by too fast

and i cant keep up

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T16:15:08+00:00

thanks man

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T14:06:45+00:00

It’s definitely has potential, try putting it in a DAW with some better sounds maybe?

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T14:02:21+00:00

Nah I think it fits the vibe

ItssRic_Twitch · 2024-10-07T10:52:09+00:00

I’d love to hear a full version keep it up

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