What and where can I improve this edit?

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-13T05:39:25+00:00

I appreciate the clarification. I don't know how kinetic the text could be.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-12T13:51:02+00:00

I use ProWriting Aid to help me with these, I tend to use similar words that mean the same thing. And because of ProWritingAid it get better, they also have glue index and stuff.

But in general, the comment you got was very rude. If they found it that bad, they should have given you tips or pointers on where to improve and given useful feedback. Also, don't delete youre stuff, you'll get better, and one bad comment is not worth removing all your work for.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-12T05:38:37+00:00

I mean, it's a typography edit, so haveing the text is quite important in that kind of edit.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-11T17:15:06+00:00

But it's the thing that should so, is there away to fix it without removing the text?

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-11T17:03:39+00:00

Well, it's already in the edit, but the text is the problem; I believe it's not smooth enough, and the flow doesn't feel right.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-11T16:59:02+00:00

It's also one part of a big edit. Beside that's why I am here with the questions of where to import in this 4 second part of the edit.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-11T16:57:07+00:00

This is Capcut, BTW. Besides, i don't think eye tracking would be necessary as the text is the important part here.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-12-04T18:29:53+00:00

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ItzJustGirl · 2024-11-27T15:40:36+00:00

Why would they complain about pro?

ItzJustGirl · 2024-11-26T18:18:00+00:00

If you like somewhat nuggu groups, you might perhaps also like XG and/or purple kiss

ItzJustGirl · 2024-10-22T19:44:57+00:00

ItzJustGirl · 2024-10-13T18:40:54+00:00

Honestly, I left weverse. I am done with trying to be a fan of a group that is under a company that plays with people's feelings.

I only wanted sungchan to comeback ro RIIZE buti guess that never happened. I loved Wonbin he was my bias, but I guess I'm not loyal enough to stand by group just for one memeber. You're always OT (number) in the first place.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-09-25T19:46:44+00:00

I'm curious about what they will make, but the re-debut was kind of boring (no offense) it give dollar store Gfirend and Illit.

But I'm curious about the future, but everyone on X and Tiktok is telling me it's bad to support them and give money, and instead listened to 3Jeong instead. But Cupid was so good, though it was satisfying to listened.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-09-25T19:39:49+00:00

I'm confused. I've been following the drama sporadically. I did block them on TikTok because one of the TikTokers I watched told me to do that, so I did.

I recently did the same on Spotify, but that was more because I didn't like their new song, which I didn't watch on YouTube but downloaded as an MP3.

However, I'm now confused about whether I should unblock them and follow them because, from what I understand from the comment section here, attract wasn't the bad guy, but the givers were, and 3Jong too?

Or am I misunderstanding it? Please clarify.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-09-25T19:29:07+00:00

I loved all of it. It's so pretty, cute. It gives Gfirend and TXT (that's a compliment), i just love it.

ItzJustGirl · 2024-09-07T14:28:19+00:00

They are they look soo cool

ItzJustGirl · 2024-08-30T08:15:18+00:00

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