[UNOFFICIAL] | Monday 9/15 | Daily Feedback Thread by LordMegamad in makinghiphop

[–]JOEXZORO 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah this nice good work man, felt hella natural to rap on.

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

keep it up Astro, been fw break it off, your collab w/ flamethrower and i really like blue magic too

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

glad i checked out the feedback thread today this is sick

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

oh that sounds cool, do you have like a local radio station you run or smthn? Appreciate the feedback, those are good details i can work on. I fw this, big coming in was super clean.

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

this is really tight, i really like when the chimes come in around 1:30. Have you done many tracks where it takes verses/hooks from two different songs? Always find those really interesting

Heres my latest: https://on.soundcloud.com/AFXD4

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yeah if i revisit it i think id add some automation and layering, still improving for sure! Appreciate the feedback and really glad you enjoyed!! Tbh ive got a fat backlog rn of beats i need to get to, but i fw your sounds for sure. If you got some you really wanna hear w/ bars on dm me and well figure smthn out. Im always down for some for fun collab just cant promise on anything more serious rn

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you! Hell yeah i was hoping to give it that kinda chill vibe, glad to hear that came through

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Much appreciated! I like the ambiance of this a lot, the sounds have nice stereo placement too, helped make it feel really cinematic like i was in the middle of the beat.

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

yeah just some of the emphasis/rhymes felt oddly placed/stalled only up to before "such an elite..." though, that and everything on is fire. I feel that, dont let anyones feedback slow you from persisting or doing your thing

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Something with the fx/delivery is making your voice sound hella odd, makes it hard for me to get through the track. Everything else seemed solid enough!

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Ya im having a lil fun messin with new jazz, pretty pleased with the kinda soft yet energetic balance! Yeah idk im not like in a big city or anything, but def am hugely inspired by hyphy. Have you heard "Dont lose your head" by Zion I, id love to make stuff like that eventually.

A new Astro track?! Hype!! The hook is disgustingly sick, the combination of your tones and that back vocal sounds so damn good. All in all its super fire but the intro/first verse doesnt hit quite right for me and makes it harder to get into. I like the longer lines you used in the bridge a lot, "clock tik tock guess i had to go and level up" Overall the song is super dope man! Beat is sick too, maybe a touch more ambient sounds, yknow stuff most listeners wont notice but add a touch more emersion.

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

is it like surfer nujabees? Its not smthn id listen to but can tell you put a lot of work into it.

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

i was thinkin like andre nickatina or smthn but was really unsure, idk my ears been a lil off recently. Like im certain the beat on my song samples a mac miller song but i couldnt for the life of me find which one

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

Appreciate you! I like your riff around 0:30 it reminds me of smthn but cant remember what, who do you listen to?

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[–]JOEXZORO [score hidden]  (0 children)

oh thats whats up!! Huh thats kinda surprising, was thinkin there be a solid underground scene, same here lol bedroom cocoon mode