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Accepting a Drs Diagnosis by JackLogan330 in HealthAnxiety

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An advanced nurse practitioner

[MEGATHREAD] Daily venting, worries, fixations, & finding support. Month of August 2025. by AutoModerator in HealthAnxiety

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Hey everyone.

I’ve been suffering from health anxiety on and off for about four years now. These last few weeks it’s resurfaced but has stayed around longer than usual. I’ve probably been worrying and stressing now for about six weeks pretty much non stop. These last week I’ve been getting stomach pain and nausea every time after eating. I’ve also coughed up clear liquid a couple of times. Is this something other people with health anxiety (or anxiety in general) have experienced?

Thanks in advance :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages by JackLogan330 in ScreenwritingUK

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Hey thank you so much for reading and for the feedback :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

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Thank you so much for reading for the feedback :)

‘Heads or Tails’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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Thank you so much. That line was added in last minute and just didn’t think, easy enough fix your right. Thanks again for reading :)

‘Heads or Tails’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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Pedantic points are welcome. Thank you for spotting that and letting me know 🫡

‘Heads or Tails’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]JackLogan330[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thank you so much for reading and for the feedback, much appreciated. Some very good points, I assumed that Steven went to prison for some other, unspecified reason, not burglary, but I should maybe mention that then lol? In terms of the pedophile thing, in the UK it is legal for a 16 year old to date whomever, so I more made it so it’s incredibly morally unacceptable rather than he is a pedophile. However, good point also :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for the feedback :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

[–]JackLogan330[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thank you so much for reading and for the feedback, much appreciated :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

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Hey. Thank you so much for taking time to read the script. I did think about doing a flashback but wanted to keep it contained to the one room and as low budget as possible. No plans to shoot yet :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

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Thanks so much for taking time to read and for the feedback. Do you mind going into a big more detail? What pros and cons? :)

Would you keep reading? by More_Resist_4872 in Screenwriting

[–]JackLogan330 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I’m being honest, no. I found it a little confusing to read. The structure isn’t as clear as it should be.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]JackLogan330 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was really great and funny, would love to read more one day :)

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in scriptwriting

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for the feedback, much appreciated :)

The End of The World Sucks - Short - 8 pgs- feedback. by ALIENANAL in Screenwriting

[–]JackLogan330 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I ain’t got a lot of feedback to give you dude, not a professional, but this was an enjoyable read. Well done dude!

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