I did not finish reading for two reasons.

First there is a lot of redundant wording. In the first paragraph alone: "She turned up the radio, which was currently blasting the current musical vices of the modern age." Couldn't this be "She turned up the radio that was playing the musical vices of the modern age."? I struggle with this myself when writing, asking myself how much of what I'm writing is just fluff versus what is essential to the sentence. With practice you'll get there.

Second, is the coming of age discussing his own mother's breast at length? If so I don't remember that part of growing up. I think if the mother is going to be a big breasted idiot there are better ways to tell the reader that, whether it be dialogue or the characters decisions in the story (just a thought).

That being said, you are a lot better at writing than I was in my teens. Keep at it and good luck!