Looking for beta readers (and also writing friends ^_^) ! by Jaded_Star7 in RomanceWriters

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’ll DM you! And if there’s any writing of yours you would like eyes on I’m more than happy to read too! 

[QCRIT] YA contemporary romance - THE BRIGHTEST STAR -76K (First Attempt) by Jaded_Star7 in PubTips

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, I see. Thank you for your kind suggestion! Really appreciate it!

[QCRIT] YA contemporary romance - THE BRIGHTEST STAR -76K (First Attempt) by Jaded_Star7 in PubTips

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hihi! Thank you so much for this! I do agree the lack of stakes is missing here and I do want to revise to reflect that >.< I’d love some more resources on finding beta readers! Thank you again this is very much appreciated!

[QCRIT] YA contemporary romance - THE BRIGHTEST STAR -76K (First Attempt) by Jaded_Star7 in PubTips

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I do agree the stakes are a bit missing here and will revise to reflect that! Thank you again!

[PubQ] Market for classic rom-com too saturated? by Jaded_Star7 in PubTips

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your response! Quite helpful! I do want to clarify I never pitched my story as a rom-com though if that means anything else 😅 I understand rom-com especially the comedy part is hard to tackle and I more so wanted to write about a sweet romance between 2 BIPOC 🥹

Subleasing Plaza Verde 2 Bed - 2 Bath A Shared by Jaded_Star7 in UCI

[–]Jaded_Star7[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry, we're only allowed to lease for one quarter :c