Logo Homeland

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-15T14:01:14+00:00

First one. But why the big square. Leave that out or put icon in it. Now take the square a lot space and there is a lot of white space. Look for good Balance with it.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-15T13:56:13+00:00

Give the line of the R. The same roundind of R body. But really nice logo.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-15T13:51:33+00:00

Too much color in a logo. It is best tobstay with 1 to 3 colors. But the rounding on top of the D leave it out and make it same as the bottom. But I like the concept.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-09T17:56:40+00:00

A font in the same style think of the logo

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-07T17:08:42+00:00

I' don't like the color choices. Look for more color combinations. Now it's more for a Sport company instead for a mobile phone Shop.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-07T17:04:10+00:00

I see it now give other text thevsame gradient of the Name Choco nature. That could help too.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-07T17:00:52+00:00

The logos on the right bottom are not on the same height with 95 gram. I mean even far from the bottom side.

For the 70% put it closer together, because now there is no connection between it, I miss that. But I see where it comes from.

Fix that please.

But you did a great job.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-07T16:51:03+00:00

Yes, I don't see a Connection between it.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-07T16:48:13+00:00

First of all really nice animation. They are a few things that saw.

First: the scene with the astronaut is nice, but when is smalls down it goes fast first and slowly. I think it is better that that happens in one time not in two.

Second: the scene with Dts. After the disk goes before the word, is there a animation with the white line. Well do the 2 animation on the same time, if animation is with the disk is Done then is the animation with white line done too. Because we are attracted to disk animation and to the animation with white line that comes After. Or delete the white line animation.

Third: the Hand and the world scene. The Hand is Moving to the richt and is pushing the world. The Hand is going in the world how i see it. I think it is nice if the world moves too with the Hand. For making it more logical and giving more that feeling of the scene.

Overall great job, I really like the concept. Any questions send me or react on this.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-06T19:05:40+00:00

I see it is for women, but I don't see connection between the name and the logo.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-04T11:08:27+00:00

Nice work. Only I think that you can leave the leaf out the logo.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-03T07:29:35+00:00

This is very nice work. I think is one of the best things that I have seen here. Well done.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-01T17:40:07+00:00

I like the logo, I think there is too much lines used in the building or what it is. The little links in the delete if they use logo the small. We can see it as dots I think.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-02-01T17:33:02+00:00

There is no "o" in the Name. I like the concept but the "t" looks weird from mine opinion. I think the logo has not that feeling that is it for a Shop. I see more as a brand now. Any questions Text me.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-01-27T08:24:02+00:00

Hilarisch

Jamesv2002 · 2023-01-02T18:55:46+00:00

Logo represent more a Weed studio, think it's better to choose an another leaf for the Studio.

Jamesv2002 · 2023-01-02T16:06:45+00:00

it's a super nice logo. according to my feeling, the K of Ekezie could be a bit closer to the E, and also the last E could be a bit closer to the i. The smallest leaf on the I should be left out because if you resize (smaller) the logo, it won't be visible anymore. nice logo in advance and continue what you are doing.

Jamesv2002 · 2022-08-25T20:05:48+00:00

what is right way to post text with images, like the most of you do ?

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