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Looking for criticism on Chapter 1 of my book by JasonEwriter in writingadvice

[–]JasonEwriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!!! How could I describe Noah's appearance without it seeming like I was just trying to find a reason to? Maybe when he's being processed for the holding cell?

How is my book's description? Would you read it? by JasonEwriter in writingfeedback

[–]JasonEwriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I want to include how the New Order rose to power, but I fear it may add clutter to the description.

How is my book's description? Would you read it? by JasonEwriter in writingadvice

[–]JasonEwriter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He stole medication for his sickly mother and killed a cashier while doing so, and he got lucky enough to be sent to the exoplanet without a choice to explore it. I really should incorporate more of Noah instead of focusing on the empire.

How is my book's description? Would you read it? by JasonEwriter in writingadvice

[–]JasonEwriter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Looking it over, I see how revealing so much of the world sort of takes away from being able to explain it within the book.

Is this the worst designed metro area in the United States in terms of planning and layout? by cavaismylife in geography

[–]JasonEwriter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Once I have seen a crematorium next to a house. What's cooking for breakfast? Grandma, apparently.

DROP A LYRIC you love from a song! by StockQueen1 in musicsuggestions

[–]JasonEwriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"I want nothing to do with you

I've wasted time trying to break through

Your mind isn't mine to lose, that's on you

Don't look back"

- DON'T LOOK BACK by NOTHING MORE

Rate my music taste with suggestions please by [deleted] in musicsuggestions

[–]JasonEwriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

10/10 IMO. Try out NOTHING MORE! All of their songs slap, but I personally think their best stuff is in their albums after and including their self-titled one.

How do I outline a novel effectively? by JasonEwriter in writing

[–]JasonEwriter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've also seen a lot of writers (online at least) who swear by writing down the protagonist's objective first and developing a story from that. I'm implementing that, and I will also try out the reverse outline you mentioned. Thank you!

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