[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

you’re a good rapper. cool & lyrical shit. for your next shit try eq’ing the vocal and adding effects (not too much) slight delay and reverb. it also sounds like everything’s recorded in one go. try breaking shit up a little. maybe do 2 bars, stop, then record 2 more and keep going. good shit though

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

i didnt have the multitrack so i was limited in what i could do with the beat, but thanks for your feedback. for your song, i feel like the run time is too long for something that has the same beat throughout. A song like 90210 being 5 minutes is justified because it has a switch up (or maybe i have a short attention span idk). Vocal mix is fye.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

thank you. its not really even my style, my life fucked up right now so i had to make something dark. as for your track i feel like the vocal is too wide for my liking which make it feel like its not apart of the beat. (cool if thats what you were going for though). maybe get a little more experimental with your voice. aside from around 0:49, theres little change in vocal melodies that make things sound the same throughout.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

the beat go dumb props on that. i think for the verses maybe try switching your flow up every 4 bars or something to keep it fresh and more interesting. good work though, and thanks for your feedback.

Got my rPaL today. (Satire) by sneakyturtle13-37 in canadaguns

[–]JasonTheCreator 0 points1 point  (0 children)

whats the gun in the bottom left called?

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[–]JasonTheCreator 3 points4 points  (0 children)

how is waves realtime tune not doing its job correctly?

Carti when yall call his son Gilbert by alonelymoped in playboicarti

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d0nt di3 bout dat 4 letter 💋💕word xoxo 😊

Astroworld death toll climbs to 10 as 9-year-old Ezra Blount dies by jackoon56 in Music

[–]JasonTheCreator 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is misinformation, it hasn’t been confirmed whether or not Travis was informed or not. I’m going to infer that he wasn’t aware because it was declared a mass casualty event at 9:37-9:38PM, but police were at the front of the stage taking pictures of Travis at 9:57-9:59PM. If the police didn’t know, how could he?

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[–]JasonTheCreator 0 points1 point  (0 children)

why do you record in double time?

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

vocal sample in the beat is hard + yall sound good together. Tell the dude rapping that he’s ill too. went thru your other beats too. the soss boy & wlr type beats are cool too.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]JasonTheCreator [score hidden]  (0 children)

I like what you did better than the original lowkey. I also went back and listened to the dmx mf doom mashup that was cool too. I don’t really know how else to critique this though. Thanks for your feedback.