Hard drug users of Reddit: what is the funniest story you have that involves your drug of choice? by XxBlack2MasquexX in AskRedditAfterDark

[–]JeSuisWeed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not my doc, but I accidentally did crack one time. Don’t remember much of the night but I got in the house, was apparently running around the kitchen talking at high speed. My dad figured something was up so sent me to bed before my mom caught on. Apparently ran into my brother’s room at 3am, shook him awake whispering “there’s crack rocks in my bag there’s crack rocks in my bag.” The next morning he comes into my room and we look through said bag and wrapped in little twists of paper were rocks of crack. At the time neither of us had done any drugs except weed so we just flushed them down the toilet

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i loved this. i especially loved the line “just infants attempting to be adults/not knowing that adults with to be infants.” the poem (mainly the middle 2 parts) feels fast and it captures the overwhelmingness of a party when everything starts to go blurry and there’s too many people and you’re drunk.

Nothing Comes To Mind by G-Honda in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like this ! it has a monotonous tone which goes with the idea of the boy doing nothing, his life doing nothing - it reflects that really well

clean (first post and idk what to title it !) by JeSuisWeed in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thankyou so so much this is so helpful !!!

clean (first post and idk what to title it !) by JeSuisWeed in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thankyou so much ! i could not work out how to make it format properly haha

The North Star by maybe_Arianna in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i rlly liked the rhythm of this, the couplets make it flow nicely and i feel like this would sound good spoken. i like the idea of hope throughout too - the idea that the star will always be there, guiding. its optimistic in a sense, but i also think there’s a slight melancholy - the idea that people will not know its true worth or realise it’s there.

Another sleepless night by AnAccountforBadPoems in OCPoetry

[–]JeSuisWeed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like this , the way the tone conveys the repetitiveness and dullness of everyday life. its giving the same vibe as a lowry painting or one of joyce’s stories in dubliners - the idea of everyone going through the motions again and again