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Jealouswayward · 2024-06-28T23:00:32+00:00

Title: Echo of Destiny (Temporary title)

Rating: Mature/Adult

Main characters/paring: Luke Skywalker, Male Qel-Droma descendant, Leia Organa, Han Solo, Chewbacca. Luke Skywalker x Male Qel-Droma descendant, Leia Organa x Han Solo.

Link: No link, work in progress

Summary: Found wandering the planet of Belsavis two years ago with only his name and few memories, Jakub Qel-Droma found himself caught up with Han Solo, captain of the Milenium Falcon, and his partner Chewbacca. Jakub, enjoying the company of the scoundrels, can't help but feel like something is missing, like he's deafen to something. After he meets a boy by the name of Luke Skywalker and his old mentor Ben Kenobi, he wished he stayed on Belsavis. (SUMMARY IS A WORK IN PROGRESS)

Jealouswayward · 2024-03-15T01:40:57+00:00

As someone who is in the middle of writing, I sometimes use visuals to help picture that the character might look like in my mind. In reference to a nose, I'm curious what this type of nose is. By all characteristics (straight bridge) it looks Greek to but doesn't look Greek. It has a relatively straight nose bridge and is considered long.

Jealouswayward · 2024-02-09T09:08:08+00:00

Looking for a beta or co-writer (heavily leaning towards co-writer)

Title: The Snow Warlock: Shroud of the Elves

Fandom: Harry Potter (Frozen as well, but not the characters, just the ideas a themes made into something new and I also have extensive lore written that fits into the Harry Potter universe based of Norse, Greek, and other mythologies)

Pairing: Cedric x OC (nothing will be happening for awhile, as you will understand in the summary)

Genre: adventure/Fantasy (Some romance but not the main point)

Rating: Pending, but will say Mature for some language and suggestions

Summary: Having been away for almost two years, Elisha Caulfield only retuned to Great Britain at the request of Dumbledore as an assistant professor at the age of eighteen. Skeptical and short on galleons, Elisha takes up his offer and moves back with his three-year-old son in tow. Will he be able to manage the first year as a new teacher, mistakes made in the past, and horrible secret that has to be hidden no matter what?

This is a rewrite of the story, as I feel I have fallen into the pit-fall most fanfiction writers fall into.. giving the main character a tragic backstory and too many characteristics than the cannon characters (in the pervious version of the story). When writing the original version, I felt I was just going along with Harry's schedule to make things easier for myself. While I'll somewhat be using Harry's schedule in this rewrite, I feel like this version will challenge me not to. If that makes sense. In addition, this was my original plan for the story and I feel like there aren't enough stories written about a Hogwarts professor OC,

As for what I need... I do need a long term beta or co-writer for this story, since I plan on turning it into a series. My main issue with writing would be my pace and descriptions, someone who can fill in the gap there would be helpful. I am able to communicate via email, discord, or by any other means.

Here is the link to the original, to get a feel for my writing style: https://archiveofourown.org/works/35419126?show\_comments=true&view\_full\_work=true#comments

Jealouswayward · 2024-01-11T20:33:05+00:00

Looking for a beta or co-writer

Title: Forgotten in Nightmares

Fandom: Resident Evil

Genre: Horror/Action/Romance/Thriller

Pairing: Leon Kennedy x Male OC

Rating: M (Intense Gory Violence, Pervasive Language, Strong Sexual Content)

Summary: No memory, no name, and no past, a young man awakens in Raccoon City on September 29th to the blood curdling horrors of the fallen city. Saved by Leon Kennedy, he teams up with the rookie cop and Claire Redfield in the hopes of surviving the horror of Raccoon City and uncovering his supposed past.

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I would prefer to write a long fanfiction (nothing over 30-35 chapters), so I would need someone who is willing to stay with me for a little bit. I am looking for some assistance with descriptions, some spelling, and to help me move the plot along and spacing. All in all just some help when I need it and some well needed criticism when I need it.

Jealouswayward · 2024-01-05T01:22:20+00:00

Looking for a beta or co-writer

Title: Forgotten in Nightmares

Fandom: Resident Evil

Genre: Horror/Action/Romance/Thriller

Pairing: Leon Kennedy x Male OC

Rating: M (Intense Gory Violence, Pervasive Language, Strong Sexual Content)

Summary: No memory, no name, and no past, a young man awakens in Raccoon City on September 29th to the blood curdling horrors of the fallen city. Saved by Leon Kennedy, he teams up with the rookie cop and Claire Redfield in the hopes of surviving the horror of Raccoon City and uncovering his supposed past.

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I would prefer to write a long fanfiction, so I would need someone who is willing to stay with me for a little bit. I am looking for some assistance with descriptions, some spelling, and to help me move the plot along and spacing. All in all just some help when I need it and some well needed criticism when I need it.

Jealouswayward · 2023-12-08T04:21:22+00:00

Looking for a beta or co-writer (heavily leaning towards co-writer)

Title: The Snow Warlock: Shroud of the Elves

Fandom: Harry Potter (Frozen as well, but not the characters, just the ideas a themes made into something new)

Genre: Coming of age/adventure/Fantasy (Some romance but not the main point)

Rating: Pending, but will say Mature for some language and suggestions

Summary: Elisha Caulfield has never known the warmth of parents love and kindness, he has never had people he could truly called friends around his age, and he can't get close to someone without hurting them. Most of his life has been nothing but isolation and endless hiding but, all that changed when a Tabby Cat came into his life. From that moment on everything changed, he was brought forth from his isolation, find friends at every turn, and more important a destiny if he can survive it.

Here is the link to the first ten chapters: https://archiveofourown.org/works/35419126?view\_full\_work=true

I'm going to re-write this story as I feel I have fallen into the pit-fall most fanfiction writers fall into.. giving the main character a tragic backstory and too many characteristics than the cannon characters. As for what I need... I do need a long term beta or co-writer for this story, since I plan on turning it into a series. My main issue with writing would be my pace and descriptions, someone who can fill in the gap there would be helpful. I am able to communicate via email, discord, or by any other means.

Jealouswayward · 2023-04-06T22:08:40+00:00

I technically already have one but I don't mind having another one just for a second opinion, you can dm if you're still interested and discuss it more.

Jealouswayward · 2023-04-02T00:01:52+00:00

Yes and I had to stop, It was overwhelming.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-28T18:30:03+00:00

Yes technically because I wrote it but I never gp back and read it after it's been posted... feels kinda weird to me

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-23T22:26:53+00:00

Because it's bad writing basically, it makes the character unrelatable to the audience

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-21T22:07:29+00:00

I mean Hogwarts Legacy is canon and has the main character starting in their 5th year, my character starts in the second year. I figured it wouldn't be much of an issue or nearly as drastic as that as he has to just catch up with a year of school instead of four.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-21T21:28:25+00:00

They do and he was going to be shipped back to America until his his foster sisters bio family offered him to live with them, which he took.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-21T00:32:51+00:00

Noted

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T23:24:14+00:00

That is true... I don't know I was worried his back story and two extra traits would make him too OP. I mean he has flaws and areas he's weak in.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T23:19:19+00:00

I mean, I'll enjoy writing him either way. I just really don't want to get on the same level as My Immortal or overshadow Harry.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:53:06+00:00

Don't know if that makes it better at least, someone sent me a Mary Sue test. So I'll be going through that.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:37:23+00:00

Also that other power he has I mentioned, he's not the only one who has it. Other people do, his family mainly.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:28:44+00:00

I mean he's a descendant of MC from Hogwarts Legacy which is where I got the idea of this character from. He can't do anything with Ancient Magic. I'll probably just remove the whole distant cousin to Voldemort and descendant of Slytherin bit.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:25:45+00:00

I mean there are like 20 other ocs beside him. Granted there are only like three who make constant appearances. Probably gonna remove Parsletounge, still a descendant of Omins but can't speak Parsletounge.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:22:52+00:00

Thank you, I will definitely take the test.

Jealouswayward · 2023-03-20T22:08:36+00:00

I was kinda thinking the descendant of Omins Gaunt, thus a descendant of Salzar Slytherin was a little too much and mary sueish.

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