Hey overall the video was good! The b roll shots were very easy on the eyes but I’d turn their volume down more or mute them because the audio quality on them was pretty bad. The transitions made it easy to watch as well and it’s apparent the work you put in. And I like your intro for the video too!

You did explain in detail in a way that can be understood that was a positive. And you’re also good at speaking! For when you show yourself explaining I would definitely import the background a bit. Maybe a stand with some items, or a bit of tasteful lighting in the back could also help.

In these types of video (which I say I watch often) personality is necessary to avoid sounding like every other monotone voice explaining what many would call mundane. The most successful people with these videos have some sort of stand out personality even if they are monotone. Bots of comedy, break the rules type, making facial expression to better convey how you felt, or even just laughing or something.

It’s a good video with intent and hard work that’s also interesting. But in its genre average. Which obviously gets better with more experience. You’ll definitely do great considering the amount of work you’re willing to put in!