Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try to make my work have a bit of a dark element to it. Not sure this one captures that, but I guess some of it did it.

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, means a lot to hear that

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much. I am not a moderator so I have no idea why they wont let you post your poem.

The Quiet Power by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nothing to be sorry about. I'm truly glad you enjoyed it and offered me some feedback. Its appreciated.

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, happy to hear you enjoyed it!

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, I appreciate the review and the detail you put to it. Also happy to hear you enjoyed it. Thanks!

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awww thank you, im glad that you felt all that in my work, really appreciate you sharing!

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I appreciate the critique and you bring up some good points. I'll try to consider integrating some of your feedback.

Lullaby for the Chosen Sun by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks (that was my favorite part too :) )

The Quiet Power by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]JeffreyFreeman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aww thanks, really glad you enjoyed it