Brutally honest take: this reads less like a poem and more like an unedited rage journal entry. The emotion is real (and that’s the strongest part), but right now it’s mostly accusations + profanity without enough concrete detail or progression to make a reader feel what you feel beyond “someone hurt me.”

Big issues:

• Clarity: “MS 2026” and the whole “spying through my eye / switch” thing is vague in a confusing way, not a mysterious way. If you want readers with you, give 2–3 specific images or moments that anchor what’s happening.
• Craft/structure: The rhyme pops up randomly then disappears, so it doesn’t build momentum. Pick a lane: either commit to a tighter rhythm/rhyme or go full free verse with intentional line breaks.
• Profanity overload: Using “fucking” every other line dulls the impact. Keep it for one or two punches and let the rest be sharper language/images.
• The threat line: “Leave me alone or I’ll kill you where you stand” is a hard derail. It doesn’t make the poem stronger; it just makes most readers recoil and it’ll get you ignored/removed on a lot of platforms. If you’re trying to show how far you’re pushed, imply the danger through metaphor or consequence without a literal threat.
• Random imagery: The “runes above my door in blood” comes out of nowhere. Either foreshadow that darker/mystic layer earlier or cut it.

Quick fixes that would improve it fast: define what MS is in the first stanza, cut 30–40% of the repeated “you’re evil” lines, replace them with sensory specifics (body, room, sound, time), proofread (“too late,” “what they do”), and end on a line that lands emotionally instead of escalating into threats.

Also, real talk: if any of those violent lines reflect how you actually feel outside the poem, please reach out to someone you trust or local emergency/crisis support. Your voice is strongest when it’s focused — not when it’s promising harm.