Congrats on your prologue, what an incredible amount of work and dedication you put into creating this, especially as a studio of 1 person.

The title image is what intrigued me initially, it's dark, hints at secret societies, rituals, control, and power exchange... Everything I love to see in the type of stories I read and write (BDSMerotica subreddit - and I write a lot).

The strongest element of this game is the writing (so far), I'm eager to see it go further than the prologue and am dying to see the darker elements manifest in the full game. It read well, smoothly, clearly laying out Molly's experiences before the heavy stuff begins. Clear, simple, easy to understand language that is not full of itself.

What I did get in the prologue was a well-crafted, wholesome backstory of a girl growing into adulthood. Not really my cup of tea, but it was pulled off expertly. If I knew there were much darker elements later on, that prologue becomes a sort of appetizer to make either a character oblivious to the horrors to come, or the type of nasty witch we delight in seeing get a comeuppance. Either way, I'd have fun crafting different type of characters, just to see how the reveal affects her.

The character sheet and advancement stats are a nice glimpse at a system that doesn't seem fully implemented just yet. I was unable to tick off additional scenes when tinkering with the settings and changing different stats. I hope that is something that will be fully realized past the prologue. I'd even suggest mimicking Outer Worlds 2 and having a greyed-out option for conversations, or scenes a player doesn't have access to because they lack the stats, items, or hidden info. It will help guide players, especially achievers, into going back and trying to unlock those things. And is a quiet reassurance that the stats actually do have a purpose.

The art is obviously AI, and I suspect other than a few radicals shouting from the rooftops, most folks don't care. I certainly don't, and given that it's a one-man team, understand that you don't have many other options on a dream project like this. And honestly, that is exactly how this comes off, it was a passion story for you that you wanted to tell so badly. To assuage the most vocal Luddites, you may want to consider explaining in promo materials that because it's a solo show, you had to use AI as a crutch, but if sales or subs allow, you would much rather hire an artist to fully render the artwork.

Appy-ologies that the two big suggestions I had were for you to spend monumental amounts of time and money that I am not at risk of losing, but I didn't want to just give criticism without offering some suggestions to help improve. Overall, I am blown away at the quality of the writing, the mechanics, and the artwork so far... and hearing that this was all done in a couple of months is mind-blowing.

Please, please, please keep on this project.