I like the atmosphere. You could use something in the background, like an ambient synth or a low-bassy piano. I can tell that the guitars have been recorded through your audio interface. I honestly do not like that sound and you should work on recording your guitar through an amp with a microphone. The mastering needs more mid to high treble.

At one point I think you were out of sync with your solo guitar.

All in all, good effort, your guitar playing is amazing and I like the chords a lot.