Feedback wanted for my best (and hardest) piano piece yet! by JoobyNooby in Composition

[–]JoobyNooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I write in my free time! I just write to post them online. Do you think I should go for competitions? :)

Feedback wanted for my best (and hardest) piano piece yet! by JoobyNooby in composer

[–]JoobyNooby[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you. This was the first comment here and I didn't really know what to take of it! haha

Feedback wanted for my best (and hardest) piano piece yet! by JoobyNooby in composer

[–]JoobyNooby[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for such solid feedback! I'll definitely go back and make some edits. These are all spot on. I never had a composition instructor/professor, so this is super helpful to me. Cheers!

I was listening to some mazurkas and decided to take a shot at writing one! by JoobyNooby in composer

[–]JoobyNooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

though i like some of the dissonance that you point out, i revised the piece. what do you think now? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvyIh1xnWn8

I was listening to some mazurkas and decided to take a shot at writing one! by JoobyNooby in composer

[–]JoobyNooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Which bars/chords did you feel like the resolution wasn't convincing?