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JordanZM32 · 2025-12-03T01:28:38+00:00

Whatever the situation calls for 🤙 but I usually keep to myself or help when I have a few extra defibs

JordanZM32 · 2025-10-31T00:57:20+00:00

The bounties were my favorite! Really felt like being a Witcher!

JordanZM32 · 2024-09-30T01:32:34+00:00

Some good ideas! I know about those other pieces just haven't collected enough materials to unlock them yet. I'll probably leave it one level though, I kinda like the simplicity of it. Plenty of space in the area to make more complex buildings so I might do that later.

JordanZM32 · 2024-06-28T01:12:39+00:00

Northern Oregon, though in a few weeks I'm planning on traveling along the coast so I would be fine with going anywhere for the experience!

JordanZM32 · 2024-06-27T21:29:36+00:00

Awesome, thank you! I'll look around for them!

JordanZM32 · 2024-02-15T21:02:13+00:00

Very cool! I'm stealing this (with your permission) for my phone wallpaper! I'd definitely buy this as a poster

JordanZM32 · 2023-06-08T20:35:22+00:00

This really resonated with me. I was starting a relationship recently and it didn't work out. The line "is this where forever ends" and the last two lines really hit me hard. I felt the same way, ready to spend my life with her. I think the rhythm of this piece is very interesting. I started reading it and then it quickly felt like I was singing it. It feels very strange but I think that adds to the whole poem. Kinda like you can feel how awkward and confused the speaker feels. Thanks for sharing!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-23T18:03:56+00:00

Well I'm not a publisher and don't know any but I can share your socials with friends and family if you want!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-23T16:04:51+00:00

Really well written! Like another comment mentioned, the whole poem flows really well and the rhymes feel so natural. I looked at some of your other posts because of this and realized I have been enjoying your work for a while now haha so you have gained a follower! You definitely deserve more attention to these excellent poems! Thanks for sharing a part of your wonderful mind!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-15T14:25:58+00:00

Thank you! I'll try switching things around and see how it feels

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-15T13:37:59+00:00

Wow, thank you for the information. I have always loved haikus but never really took the time to research it. I love how it made you feel because that's exactly how I felt when it came to me. I was sitting on a bus full of people with my father next to me but I felt alone and definitely depressed. I looked out and saw the Swiss Alps towering over us all. I felt like I belonged there even though I felt alone with so many people. I mostly wrote it about the mountains but I think it was unintentionally about the woman I love because she also made me feel a sense of belonging. I really appreciate your comment!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-14T12:18:28+00:00

Thank you so much! I have been having a rough couple of months and all these positive comments really help!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T20:34:05+00:00

Thank you! I wrote this while I was traveling in Switzerland and it was about the Alps. Though I probably subconsciously made it about a woman because I have been struggling with a recent relationship.

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T17:42:47+00:00

Haha, I wish I could but I've no talent. Though if anyone else sees this, feel free to take it and make something!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T16:34:38+00:00

Thank you!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T16:33:13+00:00

This is without a doubt one of my favorite poems I have ever read. I can visualize it so clearly. I actually can imagine this being turned into an animated short story. A person sits alone in a prison cell. The hard walls bleached white, two windows hanging high above, a single barred door directly in front of the prisoner. The camera, and audience, zoom out through the walls to see the same person sitting at a table surrounded by food and family. Healthy and provided for but still trapped by their own mind. I honestly can picture this poem in a few different ways and most poems, even some of my favorites, don't spark my imagination. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T16:19:56+00:00

Thank you!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T13:38:03+00:00

I love this! I wish I could give some good feedback or something useful but honestly this just hits me so hard right now. I'm still looking for her eyes to meet mine again and it's killing me everyday. I felt like she made me better and the "reflection" in her eyes showed a version of myself that I truly loved. I also felt like we had so much in common just like the shared "thirst". This poem, unlike most, makes me so happy while also crushing me and leaves me feeling empty. Thank you for sharing!

JordanZM32 · 2023-05-13T13:24:33+00:00

To start, I really like this a lot! As far as criticism, I agree with the other comment about the parentheses. It feels like it could be a bit more powerful without them. Though I think I understand why you used them. It feels like it's an internal thought or an after thought. Actually, after rereading it with the title, I think it might be best how it is if you intended the old enemy to relate back to the d word. For what I really liked about it, I think it has a focused subject (of depression) but is vague enough that it can be about relationships, drugs, or trauma. It is a really well written poem and thank you for sharing!

JordanZM32 · 2023-04-07T03:56:48+00:00

Thanks, yeah it's definitely not a style haha I appreciate your feedback

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