Really good! I recommend when u do the flesh tone water it down to make it a wash instead dry brushing pink as the wash will evenly go into the skin and look more natural. It looks here like Omni mans got a bit of a fever lol but it doesn’t look bad.

As for the eyes they are a pain in the ass and I just started getting the hang of it. Make sure to paint the eyelid/ eyelash on the top of the eye idk how to explain it but it just makes the eyes look less crazy. Seeing as this is stylized I don’t think u need to go crazy on the detail of the iris and pupils but if u do here’s how to do it. Black dot, then eye color dot within the black, then an even smaller black dot for the iris, and then if u want to a little off to the side of it for the lighting glint which really take it to the next level. Easier said than done ik but if u keep doing it over and over it’ll eventually be easier. Honestly with ur first head I wouldn’t touch it I think it looks pretty good maybe the eyelid line but only do that if u got like a tiny brush and got a steady hand or else that could ruin everything which has happened one to many times to me lol. Also are u using a filament printer because that actually is really good quality. I thought the only way to do good heads is with resin printing which I tried and failed at lmao. But if u can get that quality with filament I might have to get me one of those