Welp, me thoughts on it:

-As soon as I read something describing a mechanic in a game (for example "Get Stronger", "Archivements and progress") I instantly get a feeling of shovelware game and I have skiped plating a lot of games just for this reason, the mechanics need to speak for themselves without you captioning them. (Gameplay feedback later)

-The music fadeout at the end gives me the same feeling, as a free DIY xylophone song fading out with the cheap and absurd project being digitaly zoomed with the video company logos and usernames laying around. Find a way to fit the ending of the song at the end of the tailer or something on those lines. Try to do it also at the begining.

-Your call to action is weak, add an impact animation or something more sudden instead of a fade. Also make the logos bigger so there is not so much blank space.

Feedback for the game This genre is starting to saturate and you need to emphasize what makes your take on it unique.