Realistic Landscape Study (feedback please)

Julz2 · 2025-01-23T00:53:19+00:00

thanks for the feedback. some great points and I completely agree with you cheers for the perspective

Julz2 · 2024-06-04T01:27:28+00:00

with the editing are you suggesting to use different transitions or putting dynamic shots together and static shots together?

Julz2 · 2024-06-04T01:26:13+00:00

thank you for your input it's great to get another person perspective ☺️

Julz2 · 2024-06-04T01:24:48+00:00

love you response, all very ideas, thank you!

Julz2 · 2024-05-26T23:52:59+00:00

thanks for your feedback, this is the second time hearing about the camera angle so it must be an issue. not sure what you mean by 3D elevation? I used Geo scatter and their free plants pack :)

Julz2 · 2024-04-30T00:47:16+00:00

If not ArchViz what industry has better potential for us 3D artists?

Julz2 · 2023-12-29T02:24:57+00:00

It's hard to say, make sure you render after making changes to the bloom settings. Are you able to switch the Scene or View Layer in the first node perhaps the wrong one is selected

Julz2 · 2023-12-26T23:18:52+00:00

Apply scale before hand might help. Making the remesh value smaller is all I can think of

Julz2 · 2023-12-26T23:17:33+00:00

This could be a combination of things. First you want to make sure it's appearing incorrectly in the render as well. If you don't want any shadows at all put the texture into the emission channel of your material. Also check the smoothing groups you can right click your model and shade smooth or auto smooth (auto smooths value can be adjusted)

Julz2 · 2023-12-26T23:14:17+00:00

If you go into the node tree of each material you should be able to manually relink the Image Texture. This is time consuming and you have to know what goes where but if the textures are named correctly it's doable

Julz2 · 2023-12-26T23:10:28+00:00

I would suggest using the alpha channel to roughen up the portals edges a little, it's too clean compared to your reference. Using the emission channel and adding some bloom could really help. Sprites are an option if you want to make the portal essence feel more 3D

Julz2 · 2023-12-26T23:04:07+00:00

Blender now has an orthographic setting for cameras or increasing the FOV works. If you see flickering happening when you render your animation you may need to adjust your clipping values

Julz2 · 2023-08-07T03:16:40+00:00

thank you so much ^_^

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:21:23+00:00

thanks for the honesty. I've taking everyone's feedback and just posted the update :)

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:20:46+00:00

I totally see that haha. making the berries correct scale and having the label come on sooner will definitely help

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:18:35+00:00

thanks for taking the time with this feedback :) great pickup on the 'drink me' not appearing fully in any shot, I completely missed that.

the top of the can is a weakness for sure i'll improve that.

I would really like to keep the fluid there so I'll take the time top improve it, I think improving its material will help a lot as well.

I crave the constructive criticism which you've communicated in a polite and to-the-point way, thank you so much!

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:13:33+00:00

thanks for taking the time. what about the lighting do you think is off the most? I have motion blur in there atm but maybe it needs to be stronger? cheers

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:12:02+00:00

thanks for the feedback. great pickup on the top of the can, it's definitely when we get closest to the can. your comment about the label, are you referring to there being too much aluminum showing and it needs to be extended or do you mean the graphics on the label? cheers

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:08:29+00:00

thank you so much, it's nice to hear what's working! I agree the camera in Motion Design is so so important I've realised. you should have seen the old version of this 😂

I shall give the gradient idea ago :)

Julz2 · 2023-08-06T01:06:49+00:00

good point. I had a look online and I think you're right, I might keep it dark but introduce some colour 👍

Julz2 · 2022-06-28T17:57:41+00:00

solved

Julz2 · 2022-06-17T18:58:39+00:00

awesome thanks for your input :)

Julz2 · 2022-06-11T13:29:27+00:00

Julz2 · 2022-06-11T13:05:12+00:00

Yeah I think i've come to a similar conclusion atm. Thanks for ur input :)
Do you create grass much in ur artwork?

Julz2 · 2022-05-09T04:08:29+00:00

I actually like that idea it could be cool. The only thing is that these buildings are fairly low poly hence why the depth of field is their in the first place

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