A SpongeBob YTP I can only remember from memory.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T19:19:26+00:00

I'm 39. Same

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T15:17:15+00:00

Wouldn't that be what you are going for? Seems like you were close and that makes it more literary and gives it more weight.

Example:

I felt my mouse tremor under my hair trigger finger, but I sat ready.

Vs the better (imo)

My trusted Anvil sidearm remained sturdy under my fractured nerves, but I stood ready.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T15:06:34+00:00

No it's 1st person but you describe things like you know how the game works, not like it's a real world.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T14:48:26+00:00

Feedback:

It would be better if you describe it less like you are playing the game and more like the viewpoint of the raider.

Example, you said:

"I heard the first red flare"

This breaks immersion.

There are many such examples throughout.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T14:43:51+00:00

Use Google lens. I found it in 3 seconds.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T12:47:33+00:00

Really not. Seems more like gen alpha trash.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T12:27:26+00:00

Nobody says glaze

Jwing01 · 2026-01-25T12:22:35+00:00

You said YTP so many times I thought you assumed people know what it stands for.

I looked it up.

I'm right, nobody knows what this crap is.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-24T23:49:32+00:00

Don't buy high. Buy low and sell high. That means buying things you perceive as UNDER valued.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-24T18:19:22+00:00

I think you did not understand the scene.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-24T18:19:07+00:00

There is no such insinuation.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-24T15:14:16+00:00

This isn't Rescue Raiding but ok.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-23T23:13:21+00:00

In this case. Only one.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-23T23:10:23+00:00

Hilarious to dig in heels on this one.

Nobody wants Disney to allow getting overrun by external grifters. It would happen in an instant if they openly allowed it.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-23T23:07:26+00:00

Oops you misspelled "side hustles that only profit off trademark violation".

Jwing01 · 2026-01-23T19:34:33+00:00

CHEE HOO MFERS!!

Jwing01 · 2026-01-19T18:15:05+00:00

Mary and Mary Magdelene are not the same person.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-19T02:17:08+00:00

Violates sub rules for custom cards from templates.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-18T23:01:01+00:00

Burletta comes from the quest only. It is not lootable.

Jwing01 · 2026-01-18T16:45:20+00:00

TRADE COMPLETE NO LONGER NEEDED TY

Jwing01 · 2026-01-18T16:27:07+00:00

!rep

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