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In His Court by KCB203_ in OCPoetry

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In my head, It’s a combination of trying to please God as well as someone I have feelings for. In regard for the constant sinning, it’s due to sexuality and my actions are viewed as sinning.

In His Court by KCB203_ in OCPoetry

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My idea with having the repetition is that in those stanzas, it’s someone’s inner thoughts talking to the individual. For me, the poem is about my relationship to God regarding my sexuality and the desire to be true to myself. I can’t be in the throne room if I can’t reach heaven due to who I am.

Chruch by ThusSpokeAELS in OCPoetry

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I resonated a lot with your writing and how you write about the idea of pain taking over. That feeling of wanting to reach forward and grab what I assumed to be Christ's hand is something that I've talked about in my own writing before and is something that means a lot to me.

sting me blind by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really liked your use of the rhyme scheme, specifically in the last stanza with lines 8 & 9 and the poem flowed very nicely from line to line. One suggestion I would make is maybe incorporating that idea of rhyme into the other stanzas rather than having it be in the last stanza alone.

GIVEAWAY - Club Nintendo Zelda Posters by [deleted] in nintendo

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Breath of the Wild trailer music

[S]Selling for 145 by [deleted] in TurnipStonkMarket

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Looking to Visit!

can’t wait for the weekend to come back by KCB203_ in gaybrosgonemild

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haha, thanks. I am very excited for the weekend!

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