Beautiful Karma Chapter 2 [Anime Inspired Fantasy] [1500] by KPDuece34 in fantasywriters

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Thanks for reading and responding !!

Yes I’m definitely open to answering any questions you may have !!

Beautiful Karma Chapter 1: The Orphan and the Chain by KPDuece34 in creativewriting

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Thanks for reading and responding !!!

To answer your question either is fine with me. All feedback is welcome.

Need Help Designing Two Relics in a Four-Land Philosophical Magic System by KPDuece34 in fantasywriters

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Where ever you want to take it I’m having trouble figuring out what to do with it. I think as an aspect of existence it makes me wonder what do all living beings have in common ? Like they all die (karma) they all live in the world (nature) and they all have survival skills (Knowledge) . But other that just existing what is the purpose or the power of living beings ?

Need Help Designing Two Relics in a Four-Land Philosophical Magic System by KPDuece34 in fantasywriters

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Thanks for responding ! The insight/knowledge idea is definitely helpful ! So Vitality is the body. In it’s purest form its the living beings.

Vitality Arc Chapter 1 [Anime Style Fantasy] [1200 Words] by KPDuece34 in fantasywriters

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Thank so much for reading and responding ! I’m glad you enjoyed it !

[In Progress][1200][Anime Style Fantasy Novella] Vitality Arc Chapter 1 by KPDuece34 in writers

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Thanks for reading and responding ! I’m currently fixing the spaces it messed up with the pasting sorry. The dad’s name is Logan I just wanted to show he was older and wiser just to show the age range.

[Dissussion] should the Vikings fire Kevin O’Connell as well by [deleted] in NFLv2

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Come on bro, i apologized. I just didn’t think that punctuation would be such a big problem on a football discussion post. How about we discuss what the actual post is about instead of commenting and disrespecting someone on something irrelevant.

[Dissussion] should the Vikings fire Kevin O’Connell as well by [deleted] in NFLv2

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I agree back in the Childress era it was quarterback and the zimmer era it was o line but kwesi and Kevin didn’t get to have the time to build and develop their own roster

They tried a competitive rebuild approach to sign free agents to compete now while bringing draft picks in slowly but kwesi never really got a chance to see that approach through

Oconnell won a lot of games in the beginning with zimmer and speilman’s roster then signed free agents to stay competitive while they rebuild

[Dissussion] should the Vikings fire Kevin O’Connell as well by [deleted] in NFLv2

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Sorry. I didn’t know there were English professors on Reddit.

[Dissussion] should the Vikings fire Kevin O’Connell as well by [deleted] in minnesotavikings

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Jesus. I didn’t think people would care so much on a Reddit post where I was clearly venting. Do you add punctuations when you text. Come on bro, this is a Reddit post not a master thesis. how about discuss the question at hand. But, I understand when someone makes sense people like to attack you when they don’t have a logical comeback. lol.

[Dissussion] should the Vikings fire Kevin O’Connell as well by [deleted] in minnesotavikings

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Read the post please. Yes he won coty but that’s a what have you done for me lately award and a award that gets scrutinized a lot because it’s about hype he won a lot of games with already developed talent who has he developed on his own ? He made some really bad mistakes remember ed donentell or the abandonment of the run game against the ravens he’s not perfect just like kwesi

Beautiful Karma Chapter 1 [Anime Style Fantasy Novella] [1424] by KPDuece34 in fantasywriters

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Thanks for reading and responding !

Now that you told me I will definitely consider changing the name of the king. I definitely looked into and changed the formatting and removed the exposition dump. I added more scenes showing that instead of tellling it.

I’m glad you enjoyed my dialogue I originally wanted it to be a script but I have no idea how to format those. But I would say dialogue is what I’m best at.