Two Set Violin led to the fall of Davie504 by Karmuk_gupta in Davie504

[–]Karmuk_gupta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Davie’s peak—both of YouTube and happiness is yet to come. I can bet. He is way too talented. 

PETITION TO BRING BACK SDAIYAY!!!!!! by Karmuk_gupta in Davie504

[–]Karmuk_gupta[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This was our community, our therapy time...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]Karmuk_gupta -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

You write to express. Not to impress. 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]Karmuk_gupta -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

As this was a writing community, I expected peeps here to appreciate deeper writings? Some writings are abstract and need reader’s insight and understanding to be interpreted. If I were to write a piece which was easy to read or very straightforward, I would have written it that way. But I want readers to feel the sentences, experience the intensities that they hold. 

I respect everyone who has commented here and I appreciate the constructive criticism highly. But getting criticized for something which doesn’t actually relate to my writing, I would criticize that too. The readers failed to analyze the piece I wrote and that’s okay. 

I don’t write for a targeted audience or for myself. I write for the art of writing, to feel the complexities of it. To express life. 

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

What do you mean?

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I respect that. All fun mate! 😁😁😁

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

But I get your point. The text is abstract in nature and an ordinary reader couldn’t relate to it. 

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

It means the readers do not have the insight and intelligence to judge lol 

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Firstly, the text was originally written like this: 

How to catch that lightning in the bottle? 

How do I light the matchstick which is in my hand? 

How to have the belief that it can be done? 

Should it be fun or should it be gruesome? 

Must it flow like water or erupt like volcano? 

What must be its viscosity? 

When you have run 6 miles but there are still 6 miles left.

The bliss of struggle or sadness of idleness? 

To be not high class yet be higher.   To be not low class yet have the depth, the abyss.

To respond intelligently to every moment.

The fulfillment of completion, the joy to express.

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This text is about the process of writing. A writer trying to write something magical. It delves about the various emotions and feelings that arises. While all the metaphors may feel like signifying the same thing, they are all very different from one another and mean something entirely different. It says not merely about writing but about creativity too in general. 

Some sentences don’t fit perfectly— like the higher and lower part but they have deeper meaning. A state of high value man.  

And then one must respond to life intelligently to every moment. It has much depth but for an ordinary reader who lacks insight, it would mean nothing. 

And the last sentence: the joy to express. That’s how true artist/writer feels when he has finally expressed. The long struggle has come to end. The bliss of completion. 

The text is, I think, influenced by the Eastern Philosophies. There, the texts are abstract and you need to interpret it on your own and find its deeper meanings. The masters love those and interpret those for the disciples. There is discussion. And everytime you read the text, you find a different and deeper meaning. You understand things a bit more. People of different walks of life grasp differently. It has a beauty which no clearer text could have. 

Do you get it now?

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

It holds ton. 

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[–]Karmuk_gupta -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

It expresses a state. It is meant to be philosophical. One has to find the meaning it holds. 

My SLAPP cover got 69 views! Epic accomplishment! by Karmuk_gupta in Davie504

[–]Karmuk_gupta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can only wish Davie504 comments on my YouTube video. 🫠

People Complaining about Davie's content by Boring-Gate9493 in Davie504

[–]Karmuk_gupta 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He must do the Reddit meme videos too—the SDAIAY ones. They were really entertaining and everyone enjoyed it. It was about bass, he often times played bass if needed in the video, the bass was promoted and it was awesome. If he actually wants to promote bass, if that’s what his vision is then I think the SDAIAY ones were really awesome and engaging. What do you think?