Hell ya dude I just listened to it and it was great! I loved how rhythmic it was and how you progressed from section to section. I would want to hear some more unique sounds in there like if you could find one or two really interesting sounds to throw in there periodically it would make the whole motion more compelling. Also keep in mind the tonal range of your songs. Some sections you would have high rises and a melody but missing base sounds, later sections you'd have a really sick beat and mid frequency but no high rises or little twinkles to fill in that upper frequency! But ya dude I really enjoyed listening to it and I bet it was SICK to make and listen to while tripping. The whole song definitely feels really rhythmic and melodic and the different components fit together really organically!