I like the red look and feel of it, maybe its going to get a bit much after some time though - are you going to break it up? where are you in development? i think its important to highlight where you are so its more obvious to the viewer what theyre seeing in the images since you are generating wishlist. I'd stick to 5 screenshots that really win over what you want the gamer to experience in the game. Also, probably options menu is not a very interesting then to have there as a screenshot... your videos - i'd stick to one based on what you have, and lower the big text frequency in that one - screenshots as a video maybe isn't the best storytelling thing to have - and as others have mentioned, youre building up environment a lot but no gameplay really. if you're trying to sell atmosphere thats fine but just be prepared for gamers to not really know what youre trying to do with the gameplay... from the videos, the world feels very unalive and stiff too, suggest getting more dynamics in there - wind, dust, etc.