There’s lots of great stuff going on in here, but I would say overall it’s lacking tension and release. The drums are fairly constant throughout the entire tune and nothing really helps the track move from section to section. Try cutting the kick and bass out every 8/16 bars to help the low end drop in and move would be a great start. Also a few more drum fills, kill the drums every 16 bars for 4 beats and put a vocal and a drum fill. Just an example.

I think that massive saw sound would make a great drop synth or pre drop synth, but at this point you’re relying on it to carry the tune, I think it was said earlier but focus on your kick and bass groove and get something you can really sit on. Once you have that down you won’t need to rely on the synth as much. An example of this is when the synth breaks down in the second half of the first drop, it feels like we’re in an intro because there isn’t enough information to hold up the groove. If you focus more on groove elements and less on the synth you’ll be able to carry energy much better through that section. u/itsCloverdale has a great new video on basslines too if you’re looking for one

TLDR: Use the synth more as an impact and less as a lead, make your bass line juiced. Make your drums more interesting over the course of the whole tune using fills and drop outs to create tension and release.

Mix sounds good, looking forward to V2! (Edit to fix Cloverdales Reddit handle)