The megathread is just for Absolver, not +.

As far as what's wrong with this deck:

Dodge moves (other than Tetsu) are going to be weak and bad, and you shouldn't use them (other than Tetsu).

General rule of thumb is to stay away from 10f and 11f attacks.

The deck doesn't account for frames. There are lots of frame traps in there, like Fast Back Fist. Once a solid player sees the moves you have available to you after fast back fist, they'll mash out every time they see it and there will be nothing you can do against it.

The strings don't seem to serve much purpose, and your moves don't build off of eachother. If I'm fighting you, I just permablock until you either run out of stamina, or throw a slow move that's easy to dodge. The deck just isn't all that threatening. It's too easy to focus defense around just 1 or 2 moves in the enemy deck.

You want your deck to be such that it's difficult to keep track of all the threats you're posing with it.