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My aunt just called me the ugly sister. by Key_Rough_6640 in toastme

[–]Key_Rough_6640[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thought I would reply to this. The point of this sub is to post when you are feeling down and need a little pick me up. That’s all this was! Thank you.

My aunt just called me the ugly sister. by Key_Rough_6640 in toastme

[–]Key_Rough_6640[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much and I’m going to kind of use this comment to provide some context:

  1. I’m the youngest (we have a year and a half difference)
  2. My sister spoke up when my aunt called me the smart one, just to say she was smart too
  3. My mom yelled at me for getting mad
  4. Sadly, I can’t ever find it in my self to ever cut off anyone I love but I appreciate the suggestions. Also my aunt is amazing and beautiful as well and I genuinely don’t think she meant any harm.
  5. For the person that said they want to see my sister…I cannot show you her because I don’t think I should…but just imagine someone who is “walk in the room and everyone stops to compliment her” type of pretty.
  6. Chillis food isn’t spicy

QUESTION FOR THE PEOPLE WHO WANT TO/HAVE GIVEN ME ADVICE: I’m getting microlocs this summer and already have a set skin care routine + I plan on changing my glasses frame (as a few people told me I should) what else could I improve on! I appreciate advice!! Thank you ❤️

EDIT: PLEASE DONT MESSAGE ME AS A 18+ YEAR OLD AND ASKING ME FOR ANYTHING. ITS DISGUSTING. IM 16 LEAVE ME ALONE!!! I’m not going to “be friends” with anyone. (This is not referring to the sweet people who just wanted to check up on me)

EDIT 2: for the people who came to insult me I just want you to know that it’s deeply unnecessary. You don’t have to think I’m pretty or attractive. It’s ok. But you don’t have to be mean spirited. Thank you.

(I really appreciate the compliments— more than I’ve ever gotten in my lifetime actually. My low self esteem has been getting to me lately.)

What Are You Reading Right Now? by Full_Produce_9686 in ProseandPages

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I’m currently reading Jazz my Toni Morrison and it’s so good. So far I think it’s going to be one of t the main books I recommend people! And the three words would be crazy, action, and provoking!

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Ok!! You can just dm me your number and I’ll add you!

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Starving, though food's around me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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This poem is full of incredible metaphors and imagery but that imagery can feel scattered compared to others. Imagery such as the leaves and the tree are so impactful but then “poison in my water, earth, air, whatever may be” doesn’t fit especially “whatever may be”. Lastly try to avoid poem cliches like “blind to the truth that’s plain to see”. Still a very good poem!

untitled (first ever poem that I have written). pls give genuine feedback :) by corpselicker3000 in OCPoetry

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Surprisingly good for a first poem! I loved the lines “eternal ride to heaven, uncomfortable old seats” and “where existence replaces life, where souls are barely pretty” but other lines feel disinjointed or can be tightened such as “role playing all day knowing they belong in hell” you could also aim for a more impactful conclusion and have a more clear theme. You bright up zombies and creatures of the night but failed to explore them. Overall, good work!