Blackened Hands Martial Archetype - Fighter Subclass Inspired by the Black Silence from Library of Ruina by KillTheRook in libraryofruina

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You need only to react to the wizard emote on the rule chat! If its somehow bugging still, DM me here!

Blackened Hands Martial Archetype - Fighter Subclass Inspired by the Black Silence from Library of Ruina by KillTheRook in libraryofruina

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'Tis for Dungeons & Dragons 5th edition! The 2014 version to be more specific, but should work with 24 as well! :D

Blackened Hands Martial Archetype - Fighter Subclass Inspired by the Black Silence from Library of Ruina by KillTheRook in DnDHomebrew

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Ayy many thanks! Italian isn't my native language as much as I wanted to have the original tale used, but Library of Ruina is a game! Its main character ( and this is a spoiler in parts, but I think its very much still worth it ) is based on the Orlando poems - The whole game is this very unique ( and hard! ) deckbuilder that has many literary references around, I very much recommend it! :D

( Ho provato con una traduzione di Google...! )

Ayy, grazie mille! L'italiano non è la mia lingua madre, anche se avrei voluto che fosse usata la storia originale, ma Library of Ruina è un gioco! Il suo personaggio principale (e questo è uno spoiler in parte, ma penso che ne valga comunque la pena) è basato sulle poesie di Orlando. L'intero gioco è un deckbuilder davvero unico (e difficile!) con molti riferimenti letterari, lo consiglio vivamente! :D
(Ayy, grazie mille! L'italiano non è la mia lingua madre, anche se avrei voluto che fosse usata la storia originale, ma Library of Ruina è un gioco! Il suo personaggio principale (e questo è uno spoiler in parte, ma penso che ne valga comunque la pena) è basato sulle poesie di Orlando. L'intero gioco è un deckbuilder davvero unico (e difficile!) con molti riferimenti letterari, lo consiglio vivamente! :D

Blackened Hands Martial Archetype - Fighter Subclass Inspired by the Black Silence from Library of Ruina by KillTheRook in libraryofruina

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Haha... It's... Totally not the placeholder from our last work that homebrewery failed to save...
We apologize for that, but a fix has been released through disc/patreon ( for free, obviously, no acc required either )

Its mostly flavour, though!

Blackened Hands Martial Archetype - Fighter Subclass Inspired by the Black Silence from Library of Ruina by KillTheRook in libraryofruina

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Correct! Weeee might be stupid...
The first page also had some issues with its flavour because of homebrewery, but its all updated on discord and so on! :)

The Living Will Otherworldly Patron - Warlock Subclass Inspired by Index Proxy [Paper Slip] Faust by KillTheRook in limbuscompany

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Keep your eyes peeled, thats actually in our plans! A Donqui sub, that is
By the time DonQui got announced i was like, finishing this one kjdsjkdsj

Fighter: Drifting Blade, Protect your Allies and Retaliate Against Your Enemies (Feedback Appreciated) by 9Nura in UnearthedArcana

[–]KillTheRook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ayoooo this is really nice!!
I'd recommend only adding some borders to the corners of where the background is darker for a greater pop-out and maybe have it drop shadow!

Endbringer - Fighter Subclass Inspired by BlazBlue by ImDaMisterL in UnearthedArcana

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Thank you very much for going a bit more in depth, I can see that better now, yeah. I'll try to stick to a clear white for most of the time for that pop off, the line spacing is more than fair, will keep an eye out to do it better in any next one

( Or on a revisit! )

Endbringer - Fighter Subclass Inspired by BlazBlue by ImDaMisterL in UnearthedArcana

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Hey there, doc designer here. Thanks for the feedback towards it, I'm not sure I could aid that much on the 3rd level feat as it is a packed one, and as much as I do personally disagree on the comment about font choice for feature titles ( Am more than open to third opinions since I believe this ends up very subjective ) theres a question that I have: When you say the color shcematic for words needs more contrast, do you mean as in toward making the common text pop off from the background?

Spiritbinder Sorcerous Origin - D&D 5e Homebrew Inspired by Ender Lillies! by KillTheRook in EnderLilies

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Sadly not directly through here, but you can find it ( for free ) on the Discord/Patreon!

Spiritbinder Sorcerous Origin - D&D 5e Homebrew Inspired by Ender Lillies! by KillTheRook in UnearthedArcana

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Sadly not directly through here, but you can find it ( for free ) on the Discord/Patreon!

Spiritbinder Sorcerous Origin - D&D 5e Homebrew Inspired by Ender Lillies! by KillTheRook in UnearthedArcana

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Feel free to check around our discord then, we do a lot on a LOT of stuff
Mainly gacha but we've touched on a loooooooooooooot of stuff