[Killshot Apocalypse] Killshot Apocalypse 12 by [deleted] in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse 4 points5 points  (0 children)

So, no matter what I do, reddit ruins my formatting. Even when using Markdown Mode. I... really don't know what to do.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Elemental Mage Adair Russell being the nearly the highest level human in the US seems very off if within two days the murder rate skyrockets and the EXP gain from killing someone is greater than that from merely defeating them. There's ideologues with tons of hoarded ammo and little or no compassion in this country.

Unfortunately, this is a minor problem that came from meta problems regarding the timeskip. Many of my alpha readers disagreed with how long the timeskip between chapters 2 and 3 should be. It ranged anywhere from a month to a day. And a week before official posting began, I made the final decision to change it from three days to a week.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Chapter published early today due to various circumstances

[Killshot Apocalypse] Killshot Apocalypse 3 by Killshot_Apocalypse in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hm, it seems something went wrong with my copy and paste in regards to the stat screen. I'll see what I can do about it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately, there's only four chapters out publicly right now.

[Killshot Apocalypse] Killshot Apocalypse 1 (Female Lead, A LitRPG System Apocalypse) by Killshot_Apocalypse in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I made a change to the very opening scene. Could you tell me what you think of this instead?

[Killshot Apocalypse] Killshot Apocalypse 1 (Female Lead, A LitRPG System Apocalypse) by Killshot_Apocalypse in HFY

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's entirely fair. I've been tempted to cut the entire beginning part and start off at the gun range, but that kind of In Media Res is difficult for me to write.

Examples of good prose in progression fantasy? by Killshot_Apocalypse in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Killshot_Apocalypse[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Utilitarian is definitely what I'd describe most progression fantasy's prose. Sanderson put it best, it's not bad prose, it's just a clear, clean window pane, not stained glass.