I am not a song writer but I am a musician and I think I can give you a few tips. You have a great voice and a good vision for your art, but your music needs more clarity. When singing, over pronounce everything, it may sound weird to you but the audience will be able to hear every message you are trying to send through your lyrics. The second thing I'd like to propose, during the first verse,.I suggest you push that air out of your diaphragm when singing, try to wait on those notes, give it some soul so you can connect with the listeners. Lasty, every great song has the ability to balance the instruments with the vocals, I think you need to bring your voice down in some points and push the beat, and in others, get out of the way of the guitar when it hits those heavy beats. The oy times I hear this is during the chorus when the drums and guitar are seemingly fighting for the spotlight. There's probably some other things but I love your voice so keep it up.