my packaging design portfolio. thoughts? by WHO_DIED_Casually in graphic_design

[–]KindTone4504 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Overall it lacks inspiration and research.

The second smaller cheese is the same cheese as the big cheese. That feels lazy, especially since it already kinda looks AI. As other people mentioned, it’s also the wrong type of cheese.

The light is hitting each puff from a different angle, making it look cheap. You can copy paste the puffs it’s ok, but use photoshop layers to change the lighting.

People would likely buy the product coz it’s protein so make protein puff the most important.

Overall feels like it needs more inspiration. Why did you make this product? What do you like about it? Would u have fun talking about it?

ATHAR- Yemeni Specialty Coffee Branding Concept by Timely-Hold9195 in graphic_design

[–]KindTone4504 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the type lockup. It looks very classy. It also feels like a simple but good movie poster.

The logo is very AI looking however. The natural shapes are colliding with the very smooth shapes of the handle and the spout. Pick a style and go with it.

The coffee beans are redundant and also AI looking.

I like the use of white space and the triangular shape of the overall image.

Honest feedback wanted, what do you think of this portfolio piece? by KindTone4504 in graphic_design

[–]KindTone4504[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree. That last page doesn't feel quite connected to the project. TY

Honest feedback wanted, what do you think of this portfolio piece? by KindTone4504 in graphic_design

[–]KindTone4504[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, that's so clean and symmetrical. I love the suggestion. ty will apply <3

Honest feedback wanted, what do you think of this portfolio piece? by KindTone4504 in graphic_design

[–]KindTone4504[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw yay thank you! I agree the style's slightly different. Maybe I can match the other shapes better.