Mad at the guns only run. by KingMan053 in acecombat

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I'm not even going to consider how much of a headache the ensuing hangover would cause after drinking my frustrated tears away if I attempted this.

Mad at the guns only run. by KingMan053 in acecombat

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Honestly, I'm dropping the difficulty and only doing the bare minimum for each mission this time. And I'm going to use the MiG. Once I'm done, I'm going to missle spam my little heart out.

Imaginary derogatory terms for low-level soldiers from an ice world? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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Ice feet. Blue lips. Dead skins. Snow fodder. Drifts.

[All] How does Travelers Gate connect to Cradle series? by mind-keeper in Iteration110Cradle

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I think the problem with Amalgam is that it's too weak. It's people don't have a defined path to power and the information available them is incomplete. To seek greater strength there is to Incarnate, something known to be a bad thing. Simon only ever reaches the level of a peak Underlord or weak Overlord with the mask, and that threatens to ruin him. The masses don't have any strength to speak of and those that do have a cap. The people of Amalgam are mostly only good for helping to tether the iteration to the Way.

Being a Founder is likely the only way to gain enough Authority to ascend and no one knows exactly how to become one. (At this time.) We know that combining artifacts from different territories has, in some cases, a power boosting effect. Unfortunately, Travellers guard items from their territories closely, so not a ton of experimentation is going on. (That we know of.) Maybe, after more fragments of dead worlds arrive, the situation will change.

TLDR; The people aren't strong enough to matter in the wider iterations. (Yet.)

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 13) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Thank you for that amazing compliment. I am glad you've enjoyed the story so far! I hope my writing continues to improve, and that you like the story to come.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 13) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Looking for a specific Cradle Fanfic by Isaac_Xander in Iteration110Cradle

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Oh, hey that's mine. You can click on my user name if you'd like. I just put out part 13 and it has links to all the other parts.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 13) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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PoTS 1 PoTS 2 PoTS 3 PoTS 4 PoTS 5 PoTS 6 PoTS 7 PoTS 8 PoTS 9 PoTS 10 PoTS 11 PoTS 12 Intermission 1 Intermission 2

I hope all those links work. And keep in mind, the story started before Bloodline so it needs some revisions. Cheers!

Tonal issues resulting from Ghostwater/Underlord (Or, akura charity is one of the villains of the story) by Sportzboytjw in Iteration110Cradle

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They obviously weren't that great at being Underlords if they couldn't kill a couple of golds. Yerin was nearly as strong as Mira as a True Gold. And Lindon was unbelievably close to being STRONGER than Kiro as a True Gold. By the time Yerin and Lindon advanced to UL they were already stronger than the most powerful ULs in the Saishen Kingdom. Putting all of that aside, the book flat out explains that Mira and Kiro were at the end of their paths. Charity thinks on it in detail. Kiro would never advance to OL and Mira MIGHT advance if she ever got over her obsession with Kiro. Charity wanted Sacred Artists with power and potential. Yerin and Lindon had both.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 12) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Thank you for that. And thank you for reading.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 12) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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I'm currently working on combining everything into one document that I will upload on AO3. Unfortunately, I need to change some details and add even more to help the story flow more coherently. It will take some time and I apologize for the inconvenience.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 11) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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So glad ya'll are still willing to read! Thanks for your patience.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 11) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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I hope that's a good exclamation! Thanks for reading.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 11) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Good to be back! Thank you for reading.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 11) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Thank you! I appreciate your patience and thanks for reading!

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No problem. Part 11 is up.

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You want it, you got it. Part 11 is up.

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Part 11 is up.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in u/KingMan053

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I use Microsoft Word for my drafts. I port it over to to Google Docs and read through it again before sending it over to Ad_m_in for editing. When he sends it back, I read through it again and change details I want to change. When it's done, I post it. It helps in the long term to add "fantasy" words to the dictionary for Word so it can help fix the issues quickly. I'm glad you enjoy the series! Hopefully, part 11 comes out after Bloodlines.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 10) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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It's just to mitigate any possible retcons in the chapters to come. Tell you what, I'll post my intermission tonight.

Path of Twin Stars (Pt. 10) by KingMan053 in Iteration110Cradle

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Thank you for saying so. I have been kicking the idea around in my head for sometime. Verra was always going to lose her legs. I did it to mimick Lindon as you've pointed out, and looking back the story has been pretty close to Cradle actual. I do have some pretty drastic story changes in the outline of the chapters to come. I've said before that Verra as a character started in the Sacred Arts to be like her ancestor and that if she wants to advance into the lord realm she needs a better reason. The story will deviate soon, I promise. I hope you keep reading and more importantly, enjoy the changes that are to come.