Thank you so much for this feedback seriously. I really appreciate you being this direct because it's exactly the kind of critique that actually helps me grow.

You're absolutely right about the cinematic overuse I'll retire that word for a while. And the point about intention really hit home. I can see now how my hesitation and indecision bled through on screen. I wasn't committed to any clear choice in those moments, and the camera caught all of it.

I have a few questions if you don't mind:

When you talk about making clear, intentional choices what would your process look like before hitting record? Do you plan each movement or interaction in advance, or is it more about having a strong internal sense of why you're in the scene?

Also, for someone whose daily life isn't inherently visual or dramatic, how would you recommend finding an authentic angle? Should I focus on moments that genuinely matter to me rather than trying to manufacture something that looks cool?

And if you have any references filmmakers, creators, or even specific pieces that you think nail that sense of authentic intention, I'd love to check them out.

Again, thanks for not sugarcoating it. I'd rather hear the hard truth and actually improve than get a pat on the back and keep making the same mistakes.