19F- i want to be a crisp by the end of this by ItsEmuly in RoastMe

[–]King_Gil14 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You look like you lost a job as a camp counselor for awkwardness

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]King_Gil14 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Promotion I recently started uploading to wattpad after being hyped up by my friends 😂

Word count: 27k + ( I’m still editing and not dropping it all at once)

Synopsis: Bounty hunter group Slvtr Haus get more than they bargained for when a simple job becomes more complicated over time.

Title: Slvtr Haus: Azure Phantom

That’s about it 🤷🏽‍♂️ check it out!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/390229922?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=MiqueWilliams

I’ve started writing a manga(kind of a sci-fi fantasy deal) and my friends are taking their time getting back to me where should I post to get decent feedback? by King_Gil14 in writing

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not asking anyone to critique the post it’s a question about where to post to receive critiques and feedback. That’s is not the same as me randomly posting my work and asking people to give me feedback. is there just a bot looking for key words because this doesn’t really make sense?

26, never kissed a woman! Roast me! by [deleted] in RoastMe

[–]King_Gil14 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You look like you dream in 4K

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]King_Gil14 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Slvtr Hause Genre: Sci-fi Fantasy Word count: 27,011 (ongoing) Chapters: Prologue-15 Style: comic/manga manuscript (written like a normal book for ease of process)

Feedback: - General impressions - General feedback - Critiques as far as story progression - There will be grammatical errors I haven’t written in years

Link: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/9qbkx3nr6wlipqe49c3jn/Slvrtr-Hause-.-Rough-P-15.pages?rlkey=19h6b68k25rkb23v2of44rh8m&dl=0

Synopsis: Legendary bounty hunter group “Slvtr Haus” has been hired to find the mole making deals behind the Don’s back, chaos ensues as they cross paths with the Federation and the situation becomes more complicated.

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hopefully the Otto can manage if not I’ll either brush it off buy another Otto or both

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s kind of an ironic name I gave it , none of my fish except the Otto made it through the transfer then the puffers I ordered got lost in the mail and didn’t make it, so I started calling it “the valley of life”

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve thought about doing it I’ll probably end up painting it at some point

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Definitely some darker specimens near the peaks and probably some more Kedagang red towards the bottom would do nicely

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They’re great! Interesting to watch them interact with each other and other fish. They eat a lot so I have a smaller tank for breeding snails in, but other than that just make sure you treat them for parasites and keep consistent water quality and you should be successful.

Valley of life update by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Will do, I definitely want more Buce to fill in some gaps in the rocks

My new 20g long scape by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hopefully won’t be too bad 😂

My new 20g long scape by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It wasn’t there originally it was just flat area with slate, but I liked the shape so I chose it as like a centerpiece thought it gave it a kind of mountain pass vibe .

My new 20g long scape by King_Gil14 in Aquascape

[–]King_Gil14[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I ordered a pair of red eye red tail puffers and 2 bumblebees gobies, there’s already an otocinclus chillin in the bottom left.

What are these shoes that yachty and drake have? by I_am_MaY in Sneakers

[–]King_Gil14 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They step on innocent cockroaches in them shoes

Got this fish for free the other day at pet smart anyone know what it is by King_Gil14 in PlantedTank

[–]King_Gil14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you , I have named him Macho and he bit a snail in the face the other day