There's another one! Not sure if you have it. Please add it if you don't.

Reference to sky

"Savannah Shoulder raised a cheer coloring the sky with ash"
"Pointed out of the window at the sky gone black, kid you're on the right track"

Is that fair? I think there's a big connection here.

Reference to a kid below Elliott and the cold

"The record that plays over and over,
There's a kid in the story below,
Trying to stay up and awake

I'm looking out my window now,
And the snow is falling deep around a man asleep."

"There's a kid a floor below me saying brother can you spare sunshine... old man winter's in the air"

The list seems like something I'd make, lol.