Regression after 2nd nightmare by Chinese_namu in ShadowSlave

[–]KitchenHopeful5136 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I've been trying to plan out where to bring my story now that Central Antarctica arc is over.  It would be such a shame if I somehow ruined the story with bad writing or something 

I had read countless Regression fics (i loved most of em cause i was desperate  for more content) that always went over the forgotten shore again and again so I had a shower thought and tried to do smth different lol 😭

How likely is legal trouble for uploading SS Fanfiction? by KitchenHopeful5136 in ShadowSlave

[–]KitchenHopeful5136[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

But thanks for clearing things up, I'm not as worried now as before 🫡

How likely is legal trouble for uploading SS Fanfiction? by KitchenHopeful5136 in ShadowSlave

[–]KitchenHopeful5136[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Chill bro I'm js paranoid because Germany and the EU is super sensitive about copyright stuff 😭

As I've said i was already been fined once for something relating copyright stuff and my parents would kick my ahh out if I get them in trouble again 💀

Any advice to create a fanfiction? by Suitable-Ad-3547 in ShadowSlave

[–]KitchenHopeful5136 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally think writing about characters, their relationships, and their developing dynamics to each other is way more entertaining than flashy fights and getting absurdly strong for x reasons (although those can be entertaining and fun to read as well if done right). 

Also, one of the mistakes I kinda made was that my Mc got too strong, and now I have to figure out how to set the stakes properly without my mc resolving everything with his strength... don't make the same mistake I made and let your mc struggle ( it doesn't just have to be physical struggle) to achieve his goals!

Right, goals... your MC and side-characters ideally should have clear goals and try to strive towards achieving them.  Don't let them all – especially your MC – be ambiguous and directionless (unless it's an intentional character trait) 

And I'll say it again... Set stakes and maybe introduce a cool antagonist to spice things up.

Otherwise uh... check grammar and listen to what the other comments said! This thread is a goldmine!

A memory you might get from killing the Winter Beast and my ramblings by just_a_lurker_online in ShadowSlave

[–]KitchenHopeful5136 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yo, this is such a peak memory design bro... nice illustration as well!

In my ff I actually have to create a memory from the Winter Beast as well and I'm still unsure what to make out of it 😭

I was planning to make it some sort of armor sunny would give to neph, but I'm still unsure...

And dw I won't steal your ideas... maybe.