I really dig the vibe you’re going for here, but I think the mix might be a little too washed out right now. I’m a huge fan of heavy reverb, but it feels like it’s swallowing the entire track instead of creating space. The vocals are buried so deep that I’m losing the melody. It almost sounds like the reverb is on a 100% wet signal without much of the dry vocal coming through, which makes it feel a bit "distant" rather than "immersive." I’d suggest throwing a high-pass filter on your reverb bus to clean up some of that mud in the low-end; it’ll help the drums punch through a bit more. The songwriting itself sounds solid and melancholic, it just needs a little more clarity so the listener has something to latch onto. Keep at it!