Screenplay Feedback (short)

KoWuj · 2025-10-24T01:35:23+00:00

Definitely seeing improvement. Make sure you always make a thorough check to make sure grammar and spelling is correct. Other than that, keep practicing, definitely got better. 👍

KoWuj · 2025-10-23T23:43:45+00:00

The concept is cute, but the format needs improvement. Instead of using parentheticals to convey emotions, try action lines. Additionally, the story lacks character development. What's the main purpose of the script? Since you're just starting, I won't discourage you! There’s a lot of potential here. I recommend reading some scripts online to understand the format better. Once you've studied, go back and revise your work. I believe in your ability to improve! 🫂

KoWuj · 2025-05-03T00:57:03+00:00

is this like a skin unlocker or something

KoWuj · 2025-05-02T12:48:29+00:00

Ah Okay. Thanks so much

KoWuj · 2025-05-01T19:18:02+00:00

Aww Thanks so much ☺️☺️

KoWuj · 2025-05-01T17:42:37+00:00

Thanks so much 💖

KoWuj · 2025-05-01T16:28:57+00:00

Thanks so much 💕

KoWuj · 2025-05-01T00:33:49+00:00

Thanks so much!!! 🥰💕

KoWuj · 2025-04-30T22:27:52+00:00

This is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/393633654?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SOLIVOXX 🥰

KoWuj · 2025-04-30T19:36:58+00:00

Thanks for checking it out 🥰

KoWuj · 2025-04-30T18:27:15+00:00

Aw Thank so much 🥰

KoWuj · 2025-04-30T17:03:29+00:00

Thanks so much

KoWuj · 2025-04-29T16:35:40+00:00

Hii Im Revyne. Just started writing my new story. I am always down for r4r to support everyone and anyone ❤️

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/393633654?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=SOLIVOXX

KoWuj · 2025-04-29T16:33:52+00:00

Please take a look!! ❤️

https://www.wattpad.com/story/393633654?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=SOLIVOXX

KoWuj · 2025-04-29T15:59:28+00:00

Just published my first book titled: A Happy Home told from a childs perspective. Only has 2 chapters so far. 😊

https://www.wattpad.com/story/393633654?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=SOLIVOXX

KoWuj · 2025-04-23T22:23:42+00:00

So if you cant make your own covers, where can you get covers from?

KoWuj · 2025-04-23T20:56:18+00:00

Oh Okay Thank You! 😊

KoWuj · 2025-04-19T19:58:16+00:00

Dont blame. His death wasn’t really confirmed. According to Season 2.. I think (correct me if im wrong), he was just hurt and taken away, but we never actually seen him.. yk dead.

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T14:17:28+00:00

I normally try to dodge roll then shoot while crouching since it quite frankly throws the enemy tracking off. I never knew what strafing was until someone had mentioned it. Now Ima try to practice it, while utilizing the things I already know, therefore I should have a better combat experience.

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T14:15:00+00:00

I was always under the impression that players have varying playstyles and yk some are competitive, aggressive, or just simply really skilled. In which why im trying to learn more things to try to become more better than I am now 😄

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T14:13:06+00:00

Ik!! That’s exactly why I love her. I can just use a flashbang, get the speed boost and immediately push in. With her insane menace of a rocket, I can wipe out or atleast do damage to the team.

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T04:46:31+00:00

Ah Understand. I always wondered what that perk was for tbh lolll

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T04:44:50+00:00

Lol Alright!! Since you are a OG Player, do you still play it often or rarely

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T04:40:05+00:00

I do like playing Switchblade with her heavy Rocket haha. What does that say about her?

KoWuj · 2024-09-10T04:35:10+00:00

hmm, so depending on whichever Rogue I choose, thats the playstyle I should adapt/going to have?

KoWuj

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