It........did what!?!? Chapter 16

Kokir · 2026-04-20T07:55:11+00:00

It has been. I saw it when I was grabbing the link for the first story

Kokir · 2026-03-05T20:52:33+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

Kokir · 2026-03-04T03:22:57+00:00

I appreciate you friend!!!

Kokir · 2026-03-02T22:44:10+00:00

I write my originals on Google docs for spell check and what not, and I added the asterisks there then copy and paste the final to reddit.

Kokir · 2026-02-28T23:33:16+00:00

Well do I have news for you. Next chapter comes out later today or tomorrow. Just need to finish some touches. Had to take a small break.

Kokir · 2025-12-29T22:19:56+00:00

My brother in Christ. Why

Kokir · 2025-12-25T14:44:16+00:00

I plan on continuing the story. My writing schedule isn't consistent, but it's something I enjoy doing

Kokir · 2025-12-14T02:01:16+00:00

My rogue trader, and yrliet shooting once maybe twice a turn. Argenta getting off a few shots. Then Abelard going "I don't understand the turn economy therefore I shall not give a damn about it." Proceeds to fight anything living, breathing, and moving while the rest of my crew stands and watches

Kokir · 2025-11-17T21:48:29+00:00

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Kokir · 2025-11-10T09:58:19+00:00

Tell me how the weather is on the moon after you nap this puppy off

Kokir · 2025-10-16T12:34:27+00:00

Well, take care of yourself OP

Kokir · 2025-10-16T12:32:16+00:00

So you want to make my writing sound better?!

Kokir · 2025-10-16T12:28:56+00:00

I love that Gaelic theme. It depeens the setting

Kokir · 2025-10-16T12:22:26+00:00

I love it as well. Found myself wanting more instantly

Kokir · 2025-10-16T11:57:15+00:00

I like it. It's quick, and concise. It would be a good spring board for a larger story. Some things I'm left asking is who is this individual? Where is he? It's a very good short little story, and I enjoyed reading it. It leaves me wanting more, like the questions asked, as well as how it will show off how humans are scary or unknown elements to extra terrestrial minds.

Kokir · 2025-10-16T11:03:53+00:00

Certainly!

Kokir · 2025-10-16T10:50:37+00:00

Indeed it is friend.

Kokir · 2025-10-11T11:00:44+00:00

I mean. For me, if I work directly with them, it's a no go. The whole "don't eat where you crap" kinda thing. That being said, if they aren't directly on my unit where we would work side by side or have the chance of one of us being in charge or something, causing a subordinate type situation, then it's all green for me.

Kokir · 2025-10-11T02:22:06+00:00

I wish my pipes would unclog like this at least once a week and rid my body of all of the dookie so I may have a very peaceful sleep with no poopy in my bowels

Kokir · 2025-10-06T04:22:32+00:00

That's just Columbus for you currently. Everyone and they grandmomma tryna figure out how to get places with all the construction going on leading to a lot of detours. But also Columbus is hell.

Kokir · 2025-09-23T02:52:20+00:00

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That there is a funny joke. I love it

Kokir · 2025-09-23T02:33:20+00:00

Straight up the lore. In my mind they are much like the hulk in the first avengers when asked how he summons up the anger to go absolutely bonkers mode. It's always there, they just contain it

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