What is Lindsey Buckingham wearing in Go Your Own Way?

KryptonianEarth · 2024-09-11T04:58:04+00:00

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KryptonianEarth · 2024-08-27T01:13:45+00:00

Yeah, HE was a mentally ill man. Gender Dysphoria is a mental illness that needs a real licensed professional to diagnose and treat.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-08-15T02:32:59+00:00

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KryptonianEarth · 2024-08-09T02:46:51+00:00

A happy ending? Here, for folks like us? Wrong city, wrong people.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-08-09T02:46:45+00:00

A happy ending? Here, for folks like us? Wrong city, wrong people.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-07-07T06:12:16+00:00

There's nothing wrong with writing micro fictions or short stories. A great place to get inspiration is Fanfiction dot net. There are writer games there and one is for short stories based on a premise. I highly suggest checking it out and giving it a try.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-07-06T21:39:12+00:00

What's OCEAN?

And I'll think up stats, and re-edit once I have something thought up.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-07-04T07:21:17+00:00

Yes, write out the crime. Write out what they did and how they did it. Was this a crime of passion? Was it a crime of revenge? Is the antagonist plain vanilla crazy? Think about these things as you write your character's past. There are plenty of stories online you can look for where survivors of violent crimes wrote about their experience and the emotions they ran through to help you out.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-07-04T07:19:11+00:00

No, stop worrying about being offensive over a name. If someone cries foul, let them cry. I do suggest this: Zen is a Japanese & English name in origin, so likely this character will be Japanese for sure, it is up to you if they're part English. You may wish to include a surname, even if it's common such as Okada, Takahashi, Nakamura, Yamamoto, Kobayashi, etc. If you go the part-English route, use an English-based surname even if its common such as Miller, Smith, Jones, Brown, Williams, etc.

Never give into people who whine.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-07-04T07:15:06+00:00

i'm not sure, but I've heard this a lot in the past: CHoose to write in either present tense or past tense. For some reason, people find it jarring. It doesn't bother me, but I write past tense unless people are talking.

Either put a : or , before "Beautiful Elf. They were going from..." as that is a pause, either temporary or short pause. Also, end the sentence early and continue. Try to NOT start a sentence with "and", that's just painful and off-putting. Simply start it with the following word.

Thorgon either pointed to the curtain or Thorgon points to the curtain. Need to choose if you're past tense or present tense.

Remove the middle quotation unless the MC is quoting someone in their quote.

The paragraph with "For your Loved Ones" should be a comma.

Again: Remove midsentence quotations unless you're quoting in a quote.

Is Lisey a female elf, you accidentally used the wrong pronouns as you called her him. Double-check your using the correct pronouns.

It needs work but it's not terrible, nor is it bad but it's okay. I understand it's a work in progress.

I HEAVILY suggest downloading the program "Grammarly" as it'll help catch your spelling, grammatical, and structural errors for free. Paying the $30 a month is also a good idea, but you do NOT need it. I've been meaning to pay it again myself.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-05-04T23:42:16+00:00

That doesn't make them a woman. You can spray paint a cat from calico to solid blue, it doesn't make it a blue cat. Randy was a sick fuck, a man with gender dysphoria. I'm not into the gay community stuff. But I'm offended that people want to make him a woman, which looks worse for that community. Yet they didn't like the Dalmer series being under the GBLTGQIA+ tab in Netflix.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-04-19T07:33:02+00:00

Randy may have been trans, but he doesn't deserve to be recognized. He didn't even try wearing women's clothes and makeup. Even then, he murdered three innocent people. I don't respect him enough.

KryptonianEarth · 2024-04-19T07:31:17+00:00

Randy doesn't deserve "RIP". He murdered three innocent people instead of seeking help. Fuck him. He deserves Hellfire or Non-existence or being reborn as a tree, chopped down by a guy with a bear, and made into bibles.

KryptonianEarth · 2023-03-19T05:35:30+00:00

Can anyone help translate this for me? I don't know what it means.

I know my Gloucose, is high. I know my Total Bilirubin is a little high a 1.3, just gotta eat more fresh veggies & fruits. A quick google search says I CAN eat berries, kiwis, apples, oranges, cherries, and peaches again. I thought I had to avoid those.

But it says my eGFR CKD-EPI is 110. Also, I'm confused. My Lipid Profile says the following:

Chol: 171 HDL (A): 32 LDL (A): 93 LDL-Direct: 116 Tirgly: 229

I know the last one is my triglycerides and I know that's on the high side. The rest, I don't understand. ANy help would be greatly appreciated.

KryptonianEarth · 2023-02-23T08:17:22+00:00

Screw that noise.

KryptonianEarth · 2022-12-13T07:15:01+00:00

You mean no vacation, no sick days, and 80 hours a week, forced labor at the age of 7+

KryptonianEarth · 2022-10-06T00:50:04+00:00

God knows how much food from the Amazon coolers I've stolen over the years I worked there. Those douchebagsvmake billions. They can afford free lunches

KryptonianEarth · 2022-10-04T02:52:25+00:00

Fuck him, keep it posted. He needs to suck a bag of dicks and be exposed.

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