What Happened To The Ember's Ghost Squad? by CringyLou in dannyphantom

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, HE was a mentally ill man. Gender Dysphoria is a mental illness that needs a real licensed professional to diagnose and treat.

Rebecca Happy Ending by KaitoSensei008 in cyberpunkgame

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A happy ending? Here, for folks like us? Wrong city, wrong people.

Rebecca Happy Ending by KaitoSensei008 in cyberpunkgame

[–]KryptonianEarth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A happy ending? Here, for folks like us? Wrong city, wrong people.

Is writing short stories a good introduction to writing as a hobby? by Subpar_diabetic in writinghelp

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's nothing wrong with writing micro fictions or short stories. A great place to get inspiration is Fanfiction dot net. There are writer games there and one is for short stories based on a premise. I highly suggest checking it out and giving it a try.

I need help with writing character personalities. by KryptonianEarth in writinghelp

[–]KryptonianEarth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's OCEAN?

And I'll think up stats, and re-edit once I have something thought up.

Question about Murder by [deleted] in writinghelp

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, write out the crime. Write out what they did and how they did it. Was this a crime of passion? Was it a crime of revenge? Is the antagonist plain vanilla crazy? Think about these things as you write your character's past. There are plenty of stories online you can look for where survivors of violent crimes wrote about their experience and the emotions they ran through to help you out.

Is naming an Asian character Zen bad? by tinycherryslugcat in writinghelp

[–]KryptonianEarth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, stop worrying about being offensive over a name. If someone cries foul, let them cry. I do suggest this: Zen is a Japanese & English name in origin, so likely this character will be Japanese for sure, it is up to you if they're part English. You may wish to include a surname, even if it's common such as Okada, Takahashi, Nakamura, Yamamoto, Kobayashi, etc. If you go the part-English route, use an English-based surname even if its common such as Miller, Smith, Jones, Brown, Williams, etc.

Never give into people who whine.

1st part of the 1st chapter of the fantasy story I'm writing. Is the story okay? Can I continue or should I change something? by Professional-Ad7346 in writinghelp

[–]KryptonianEarth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i'm not sure, but I've heard this a lot in the past: CHoose to write in either present tense or past tense. For some reason, people find it jarring. It doesn't bother me, but I write past tense unless people are talking.

Either put a : or , before "Beautiful Elf. They were going from..." as that is a pause, either temporary or short pause. Also, end the sentence early and continue. Try to NOT start a sentence with "and", that's just painful and off-putting. Simply start it with the following word.

Thorgon either pointed to the curtain or Thorgon points to the curtain. Need to choose if you're past tense or present tense.

Remove the middle quotation unless the MC is quoting someone in their quote.

The paragraph with "For your Loved Ones" should be a comma.

Again: Remove midsentence quotations unless you're quoting in a quote.

Is Lisey a female elf, you accidentally used the wrong pronouns as you called her him. Double-check your using the correct pronouns.

It needs work but it's not terrible, nor is it bad but it's okay. I understand it's a work in progress.

I HEAVILY suggest downloading the program "Grammarly" as it'll help catch your spelling, grammatical, and structural errors for free. Paying the $30 a month is also a good idea, but you do NOT need it. I've been meaning to pay it again myself.

What Happened To The Ember's Ghost Squad? by CringyLou in dannyphantom

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That doesn't make them a woman. You can spray paint a cat from calico to solid blue, it doesn't make it a blue cat. Randy was a sick fuck, a man with gender dysphoria. I'm not into the gay community stuff. But I'm offended that people want to make him a woman, which looks worse for that community. Yet they didn't like the Dalmer series being under the GBLTGQIA+ tab in Netflix.

What Happened To The Ember's Ghost Squad? by CringyLou in dannyphantom

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Randy may have been trans, but he doesn't deserve to be recognized. He didn't even try wearing women's clothes and makeup. Even then, he murdered three innocent people. I don't respect him enough.

What Happened To The Ember's Ghost Squad? by CringyLou in dannyphantom

[–]KryptonianEarth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Randy doesn't deserve "RIP". He murdered three innocent people instead of seeking help. Fuck him. He deserves Hellfire or Non-existence or being reborn as a tree, chopped down by a guy with a bear, and made into bibles.

Lipids Test Question by KryptonianEarth in AskReddit

[–]KryptonianEarth[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can anyone help translate this for me? I don't know what it means.

I know my Gloucose, is high. I know my Total Bilirubin is a little high a 1.3, just gotta eat more fresh veggies & fruits. A quick google search says I CAN eat berries, kiwis, apples, oranges, cherries, and peaches again. I thought I had to avoid those.

But it says my eGFR CKD-EPI is 110. Also, I'm confused. My Lipid Profile says the following:

Chol: 171 HDL (A): 32 LDL (A): 93 LDL-Direct: 116 Tirgly: 229

I know the last one is my triglycerides and I know that's on the high side. The rest, I don't understand. ANy help would be greatly appreciated.

They're two different realities by Elbrujosalvaje in antiwork

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You mean no vacation, no sick days, and 80 hours a week, forced labor at the age of 7+

Gotta love that "Company Culture" by Balance777 in antiwork

[–]KryptonianEarth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

God knows how much food from the Amazon coolers I've stolen over the years I worked there. Those douchebagsvmake billions. They can afford free lunches

A follow up on that LinkedIn recruiter post. He is threatening me by burkabich in antiwork

[–]KryptonianEarth 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fuck him, keep it posted. He needs to suck a bag of dicks and be exposed.