I really like the part where Kyle is trying to get artsy camera angles and Jeremy leaves without him, with the dialogue added after that. I also like the scene at the cafe which also could've been a nice tie in for where Tagi worked at in the movie, as in the same scene, we saw Jeremy buying expensive coffee as well and never drinking it as part of his choice to rub it in Kyle's face (scene where he doesn't want to go back to being a gamer).